This story is excellently written, while Ange de l'eau tends to focus a bit more on the setting rather than the characters, this is a very slight mistake and hardly noticeable.

The characters and their dialogue fit their past that was set in the comic, and despite the latest pages directly contradicting this story, when Ange de l'eau wrote this it seems a fitting end to Varden and Lei's romance. (Bonus points for Lei's response to the comments on her speech.)

I reccomend this story to all who enjoy a story which gives a good sense of emotion and romance.

9.5/10

JJD

Hah!

Nice Snow Patrol reference there!

Aww...that's so sweet. And well-written to boot - I congratulate you. Sorry, that comes of being a Varden+Lei'ella fan. They're so cute together.

SQUUE!

This is so well written! YAY!
I liked that we got both of their thoughts, and that the kiss wasn't rushed.

*dances!*