I'm afraid it's just as I speculated: a masterpiece, again!
And that epilogue was wonderful; at the end of the discussion between Flitwick and Remus I was both on the verge of tears and sporting an enormous grin...
Thank you again, and hats off for such a good story

Hm, maybe I shouldn't have disappeared from the hp fandom after DH was read...ah well! A single reread was enough to reel me back! And what do I find but this gem of a hp fanfic.

Excellent story, I loved the interaction between everyone, and seeing the Lupin family was very sweet. And what a wonderful loophole for Teddy to take advantage of! So happy to see this end with a happy ending for all. Makes me glad that I was able to read it in one go, cause I don't think I could've handled the tension near the end. Then again, I was able to see the chapter titles at the end, so that didn't really help me during that trial portion. Those goodbyes were so sad, I actually got a little choked up during that.

But all's well that ends well. :D The bad guys in the case have been since fired or relocated, Tonks has her Auror job back, Remus is back to teaching at Hogwarts (which is good as new after 20 years), permanently by the sounds of it, and Teddy wasn't sent to Azkaban, instead soon to become a teacher himself. Can't get better than that.

What?!?! Oh my God!! I need to read more... and get a life... oh well, here's to being grounded at home on a Friday night.

I know I'm reviewing again really quickly but your story just keeps getting better and better. I'm adding it to my favorites! It's simply brilliant!

Excellent chapter. Remus wasn't saved, was he? I'm hooked... I think I'll read the next chapter now.

This was one of the best stories I have ever read. It had me laughing and crying and everything in between. I always hated how Remus and Tonks died. Tonks is one of my favorite characters. I love how this fits cannon because its easy to think this is how it happened. Thank you so much for writing this.

Such a perfect ending to a wonderful story! The perfect jobs for all of them. Couldn't picture it any other way. And that was the best family moment there at the end! The only thing missing that I would have liked to see either from Remus' or Tonks' POV was Teddy's proposal to Victoire!

Ok, so about the story as a whole! It was WONDERFUL! It was so perfectly constructed and detailed! You covered EVERYTHING! Not a question went unanswered and you made everything believable! This was such a fantabulous and gronderful story! Thank you so much for writing it!

WOO-HOO! BOOYAH! THEY FREE THEY FREE THEY FREE! THIS IS POSITIVELY WONDERFUL!

1. Penny nodded firmly. “And because Nymphadora is. I…”
“Tonks.”

XD You just have to love Tonks! They're busy discussing why she shouldn't be convicted to death, and she still has to correct her name!

2. “Of course-” the casual, matter-of-factness to Hermione’s tone drew immediate attention. “-that does mean you can’t send Teddy to Azkaban.”
“But officially, it was an accident.” There was something just a tiny bit glib about the look on Hermione’s face. “He acted on impulse. How do you think it will look if the Ministry is seen to send a young man to prison for being involved in an accident and then impulsively saving two loved ones? Who out there wouldn’t have done the same? It will seem very cruel. People might suspect that there has been some kind of cover up…”

DOL! LOVE Hermione too! Her casualness and..and..and pure and simple AWESOMNESS is so great!

YES! YES! YES! YES! YES! HAHAHA! They didn't get killed! -spins around in happy circles-

I'm not going to lie, you had me completely and utterly convinced they were going to die! I spent this ENTIRE chapter(save the last few paragraphs) in tears. I'm not joking or exaggerating at all. I was sitting in the living room reading this sobbing and rocking back and forth. It was too tragic. My face was completely red and my eyes were all puffy! My family was really worrying that something was wrong with me, which there probably is..But that's not the point! DeWinter is so heartless and cold! He doesn't even care! It's terrible.

The whole chapter, through my tears, I was trying to think of a way to possibly get around this, and I thought that maybe Tonks would get pregnant again. Crazy I know, but really I don't think even DeWinter could send an innocent baby to it's death..So that was seriously(Siriusly!) my theory throughout this chapter.

WHAT?! NO!! NO!! NO!! THIS CAN'T HAPPEN! I don't think it will! Nope! It would way to devastating! But I really don't see any way out of this..OH MERLIN! If they die I think I just might break down!

1)BAHAHA! Tonks is SO BLOODY AWESOME! I punched the air in glee when she burst in:

“Remus Lupin, you bloody great prat!”

Best.Entrance.EVER!

2)And Kingsley's great:

“Tonks too?”

XD

3) Ok this had some pretty great lines which I will now proceed to list:

1. Remus shrugged. “I’ve had worse. From you, as it happens. I may have to start investing in body armour…”
2.“Well,” Kingsley’s deep voice echoed throughout the courtroom. “As one of the few people in existence ever to witness the epic scariness of Remus Lupin and Nymphadora Tonks arguing over his noble tendencies and her refusal to be protected, I can confirm that if I had any lingering doubts before, they’re definitely gone now. That’s them all right.”

Ok that had to be about the best thing ever! SO TRUE! I laughed so much!

3. “You’re asking for a kick in the shins, Shacklebolt. And don’t call me Nymphadora.”

XD Tonks is love..

And of course Kingsley's response:

4. Kingsley’s chuckle reverberated loudly. “And that’s the clincher.”

4) AWW..poor Dennis! It was so sad when Colin died :(

OMG! I want to SMACK Remus! I was all for them coming out in the open, but doing it WITHOUT Tonks! I really, truly want to smack him, the great noble, thick-headed werewolf! Though it is pretty great how he just lowers his hood and goes:

“And as I’m sure you’ve worked out, Kingsley,” he finished calmly. “The person he was protecting was me.”

Can SO picture this is in my head!

Mkso hi. This is my second time reading this story because I continue to be dazzled and blown away by your writing skill. You had a coherent, intricate, and brilliantly thought out plot (which, trust me, is a lot more than most fanfictions have to offer) and honestly, I'm jealous! Your theory on time travel sounded so professional! Also, the emotion. Well. I believe I'll let that speak for itself at the risk of sounding redundant.

So yeah, this was kind of amazing. Just letting you know :)

ok not to criticize your work or try to be a perfectionist but the impediment jinx doesn't freeze you, it just slows you down. So I am hoping that I cleared it up for everyone. But really great story and unlike other people's where they make up random characters for the children's names, or at least hopefully you didn't do that since we only met Harry, Victoire and Teddy. But one more thing is that Penelope Clearwater is NOT the wife of any Weasleys(especially Percy). I know for a fact that there is Bill and Fleur who have Victoire, Dominique and Louis. Then there is George and Angelina Johnson who have Fred II and Roxanne. After there is Percy and Audrey who have Lucy and Molly. And as everyone knows Ron and Hermione with Rose and Hugo and Ginny and Harry with Albus Severus, James Sirius and Lily Luna. Charlie never got married and Fred passed away so they didn't have children or wives obviously. I hope you will read my review and if you can fix all of these minor mistakes. But all in all your story has a very good concept and plot line.

-Jasmine

P.S my name isn't actually Jasmine(that's my friend's name lol) and if anyone thinks I am nerdy well good for you because I am not. I just like sounding scientifical. And Sean if you ever read this which you won't I just wanted to let you know that when i talk about Naoko my eyes don't get bigger and I definitely don't spazz out. She is smarter just accept it and I will be smarter than you this year!! By the way why did you even say that randomly? Luv ya, bye!!

OH. MY. GOSH.

Sorry, just had to get that out of my system. That has been basically the most mindblowingly amazing, unbelievably nuanced and real (and I read tons of fanfic, trust me) and believable and crazily tangible fics I have ever read.

Phew. Now that I'm calmer, I'd just like to say that I really, really, really, love this story, I have this lit paper tomorrow but I randomly found your link and started reading and couldn't stop for three hours and I don't regret it one tiny bit.

Thank you so so so so much for writing this, I've always wondered about Teddy growing up and having no parents and the whole time thing - temporal theory is so amazing! So many fanfics are screwed and have weird plots, I was going to lose faith in seeing any single properly thought-out work, but your temporal theory and this entire immense story has got to be one of the most intellectually exercised and wonderful ever.

I am prostrate before the awesomeness of this story. Once again, thank you so much, and am very sorry for my explosive histrionics.

With love and much thanks,
abozzo.