it's really good your fanfic

It was totally wonderful :) ! I loved how you described their feelings and how natural everything was for Naruto and Sasuke.

By the way, I realized something. Most of the times, even before I read that part, I said the same thing which Naruto thought. Does this means we think alike or is it just me being a rabid Naru-chan fan? It also reminded me my own one-shot SasuNaru, "Smile For Me" because its story line was somehow like this, but Naruto was the 'first' gay...

Ok just flicked through the first chapter and I won't be reading it properly or going any futher. Advice if you want any is to cut out the bad language because it gives off a feeling of '12 - 14 year old girl who thinks that using bad language is mature and cool'.

This was a very cute, fluffy, hilarious fic.
The relationship between Sasuke and Naruto was slow paced and wasn't rushed like most SasuNaru fics can be.

However, it had a lot of grammar and spelling errors.
The characters, especially Sasuke, could be very OOC at times.
Also, I would have loved it if you had added a bit more plot to the story, made it a bit longer. That way, it could have been brilliant.

But don't get me wrong, the story wasn't bad--far from it.
I really liked it, and it was exactly what I needed to read today.
Just an all around good, feel-good fic.

GAH! NO! BAD NARUTO! BAD! DX Stupid Naruto...I'll kill him for breaking poor little Sasu-chan's heart!

Hehehe..That's right Naruto...You can't catch gay, you just realize it at awkward times. I think Sakura knows about that, too...Cough-Ino-cough. lol Good chapter!

Ohayo!!

Good fic ^^. I laughed a lot with that naïve, innocent, blind and clumsy Naruto xD. Everyone, even the parents of his girlfriend, knew that he liked Sasuke before him! Poor Sasuke, really. And Sakura simply brilliant, I loved both times Sakura and Naruto break up.

A phrase that I need to stress: "he should be a chick... then we could get married and have a hundred babies." Priceless xD

I also loved the kind of relationship they had, Sasuke and Naruto, so close...

And I must congratulate you on something: your fic don't have lemon! It's so rare to find a SasuNaru (or any other type of fanfiction) without lemon ... And I can assure you that I have not missed it ^^.

Well, I don't write english very well, so I can't tell you more than that xD Sorry if you don't understand any phrase. See ya!!

omg this was such an awsome story! Better than most! And you did the first person POV so well! I LOVED IT!

I really like your writing style. I love how it keeps you entertained and you never get bored. ^__^ Beautiful story, I really enjoyed reading.

Gah, the only person who had EVER actively liked Saku-ho in such a way is Lee. Everyone knows that guy is demented. And what makes Sakura so much better than Sasuke? Sasuke is not egotistical and doesn't go around crushing on someone because of what he sees on the outside. That shallow pink head cur.

KawaiiKupcake

Denial, Denial; what a sad, sad thing. Gaahh, Sakura would turn any man gay...except maybe Lee...unless Gaara is there or something. Then again being around Gai-sensei makes him automatically gay from all the youth&spring time.

KawaiiKupcake

The amount of dick in this chapter is blowing...that was kind of punny, huh? Dick-blow. Whatever. Anyway Naruto is so cute when he's in denial. I love his internal rambles-the personafication of Uzumaki Uke. And about the Sex thing...there's absolutely no NaruSaku sex scenes right? If there are I guess there are warnings or something so that I can skip over that...I really hope so. Awesome fic, can't wait to read more!

KawaiiKupcake

OH MY GOD! this was so good, i loved how it was all written from naruto's point of view, and you wrote it so well! i LOVED IT! keep writing i cant wait to read your other storiess!

aw. * melts*

Yay... a part I like... Th Confession! ^^