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| Badmonki 2007-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseniƱa eres gay xD opd no te burles de severus D: xD pero en fin esta super gay y divertido xD aun asi pobre snape! TKM te amo se gay |
| nekito 2007-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseOPD XD que gaydada amo tus fics son tan randoms XD owo nya creo que tambien necesito punky junky pero no comprsare morada o parecere snivellus XD wawawa te amo aki eres genial amo tus fics nush vemush bie =3 nekitow |
| Ranekaera 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseHilarious. |
| Marauders are awesome 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseYou should make a sequel with sev insulting them or something... but don't let it contaminate remus *sighs* he's too awesome |
| Lilly K 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseGood job... nice laugh here- thanx! |
| Bre Henson 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseI didn't see anything wrong with your grammar! :) Good fic! I like it; it was really funny! One question: Will we be seeing the return of The Purple Hair Gel Bottle of Doom? |
| Avindara Nirvene 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseThis story needs a little grammar work, as well as punctuation. I would suggest commas and periods before the second quotation mark in dialogues, and an apostrophe after Snivellus, to show it's Snape's. It's a quirky and amusing story, and though I don't necessarily think James and Sirius would be that stupid - maybe a little confused, but certainly not dumb, but it COULD happen to another pureblood witch or wizard. By the way, where's WormtaiL? |