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Badmonki
2007-08-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseniƱa eres gay xD
opd no te burles de severus D:
xD pero en fin esta super gay y divertido xD aun asi pobre snape!
TKM te amo se gay
nekito
2007-08-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseOPD XD que gaydada amo tus fics son tan randoms XD
owo
nya
creo que tambien necesito punky junky pero no comprsare morada o parecere snivellus XD
wawawa
te amo aki eres genial amo tus fics nush vemush bie =3
nekitow
Ranekaera
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseHilarious.
Marauders are awesome
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseYou should make a sequel with sev insulting them or something... but don't let it contaminate remus *sighs* he's too awesome
Lilly K
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseGood job... nice laugh here- thanx!
Bre Henson
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseI didn't see anything wrong with your grammar! :)

Good fic! I like it; it was really funny!

One question: Will we be seeing the return of The Purple Hair Gel Bottle of Doom?
Avindara Nirvene
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseThis story needs a little grammar work, as well as punctuation. I would suggest commas and periods before the second quotation mark in dialogues, and an apostrophe after Snivellus, to show it's Snape's. It's a quirky and amusing story, and though I don't necessarily think James and Sirius would be that stupid - maybe a little confused, but certainly not dumb, but it COULD happen to another pureblood witch or wizard. By the way, where's WormtaiL?
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