niña eres gay xD
opd no te burles de severus D:
xD pero en fin esta super gay y divertido xD aun asi pobre snape!
TKM te amo se gay

OPD XD que gaydada amo tus fics son tan randoms XD
owo
nya
creo que tambien necesito punky junky pero no comprsare morada o parecere snivellus XD
wawawa
te amo aki eres genial amo tus fics nush vemush bie =3
nekitow

Hilarious.

You should make a sequel with sev insulting them or something... but don't let it contaminate remus *sighs* he's too awesome

Good job... nice laugh here- thanx!

I didn't see anything wrong with your grammar! :)

Good fic! I like it; it was really funny!

One question: Will we be seeing the return of The Purple Hair Gel Bottle of Doom?

This story needs a little grammar work, as well as punctuation. I would suggest commas and periods before the second quotation mark in dialogues, and an apostrophe after Snivellus, to show it's Snape's. It's a quirky and amusing story, and though I don't necessarily think James and Sirius would be that stupid - maybe a little confused, but certainly not dumb, but it COULD happen to another pureblood witch or wizard. By the way, where's WormtaiL?