that was cute! and well written. nice.

That pretty much sums up Keitaro's life on a day to day basis. Nothing much to say here except you could have made the story a little longer (ie put in more accidents, etc).

But for a first attempt this is not bad at all. Good luck if you decide to make more Love Hina fics.

~Rdz

This was well written story, I really liked it a lot. Great detail on Keitaro's daily life at Hinata House and the spelling was top notch. This really was well written.

Thank you for the great work,

Ruto Kuntai

I like it so far only question, is this going to be Kei & Naru, or Kei & Shin or maybe Kei & Mutsu? I haven't seen many Shinobu or Mutsumi stories so I was curious