OMG this is fucking AWESOME!

not only are rafe and danny totally in character, i really cannot wait to see what happens next!

the conversation on the carrier in chapter 1 was well done, as was the interaction between the pilots and the jedis. very realistic. love the jargon,of course.

i am normally wary of crossover fics because they require a unbelievable suspension of belief in things like plot, logic and character development, but no such thing appears to have occured here. as i mentioned, the characterisation is pretty much spot-on.

cheers!

Hi, I'm glad you went ahead with your prompt over on LJ -- great start and keep on flying!

Actually,
that is a very nice story and I would really like to read more. (-:

Seems good has pontential.

UPDATE!

Great dream. Really like this concept.

This is interesting. I am looking forward to more.

Cheers!

I'm definitely enjoying this. I love the crossover with Pearl Harbour. That's just so bloody awesome.

Interesting premise, looking forward to more of this.