 1267223 2007-07-30 . chapter 1Alert system must be down these days , or having temprory problems , good thing I had the RSS feed as a backup .
Ryu's story doesn't sound that convincing , major changes in this world don't usually happen because of malfunctions you know , but as long as he has evidences , not pretty much can be said (especially against Ryu and Kira).
and ZAFT is using naturals as slaves \ labors , sounds like something a middle ages kingdom would do .
but still there's traitors , such situation and are already selling their people case in exchange of their luxury , how pathetic .
"...and down on earth as we speak"
as 'we' speak ??! , oh well..
Defects in birth and deformed children , a typical effect of strong radiation effects.
And a rebel forming , kind of expected , as a situation like theirs is a fertile soil for a rebillion , "Eternal Freedom" , I really like that name , sounds perfect .
the question is what do they expect to acheive , if they're going to die because of the radiation anyway it won't be a much lasting freedom , but I can still understand their reason anyway , freedom is worth fighting for nomatter what .
Eight years , and it's time for the action to start , this time against a rebel force instead of a nation , I like that a lot more (a closer situation for me than having the world split into two sides).
I wonder how Kira spent that long time ,
"...focused on two things , expanding his own abilities, and training the next generation meaning his ultimate son"
training for eight years ? that must have gotten him to a soaring level .
so they are a husband and a wife now , barely
and Sarah has got another child and kept him from becoming an ultimate , strong move .
so now Kira has a total of five children from two women , such a big family .
"Lord Hibiki" the title has that royal sound , now it does look like a middle ages kingdom !
the lord arrives and the resistance going into action , but how could they think it would be that easy , poor people , even a suicidal bombing would have a better chance , and that's no chance!
A new uniform , red , black and gold ,sounds great , but couldn't you descibe it a little more ?
Raven , sounds dark but not that strong , anyway satisfying enough as you said .
"Danger,...Can you not feel that?”
“Faintly sir…eight of them.”
and he's eight years old !
Cagalli sounds really weak from how you described it , and Lacus' children are twelve now , by the way have you picked names for Cagalli's ?
and we have some nice combat action , that boy is truly impressive , especially for an eight years old , and their MS function with voice commands, nice but why did they get them there ? I mean neither they used them nor they were needed in the first place , unless they have some new suits to show off .
as a whole this was an excellent beginning of the new dark story , really exciting , I was more than satisfied with the chapter , great job as usual .
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