great chapter. Really cute.

not bothering to pick up the shards of glass nor clean the water that lied at his feet. (it should be lay at his feet.)

Wow...

Jazz

I'm very confused... I don't know why but nothing's making sense... Is peneolope supposed to be recording Harry's trial by the wizengamot? if so how did she get into Diagon Alley/Office/Bathroom etc... It could easily be I'm just tired and missing some stuff but who knows... anyway... even the first chapter was confusing so yeah mebbe being on a plane has sommit to do with it I don't know... Again this could be just me be odd and not connecting something... and sadly I have no way of correcting cuz I'm not that great of a writer meself... anywho this is still intriguing...
Kalle

great chapter. I wonder what exactly made Percy come back.