Heh heh, yeah I`m back. I`m sure you didn`t want to hear from me again, but I just want to say I`m sorry. My words were too harsh and you really are an amazing writer. I know all those things were really nasty, but I just hate the pairing. if I hate the pairing, then why am I here? because I LOVE Titanic a lot and i`ve been dying to find an FMA version but not with that pairing. So I became very enraged and wanted to give you a piece of my mind, and alas my words got the better of me and I couldn`t stop typing. I should`ve known better. it`s going to sound really corny but really and truly am sorry.

Oh...My...God... What the crap was that!?!? My beloved Jack and Rose! How dare you disgrace that beautiful love story?!?! I shudder just thinking about the flying scene! This is worse than Erik and Raoul fanfics! I hate Elricest, but with TITANIC? You`ve crossed the line, you have a very strange mind. Oh God, I just thought of the drawing scene. I tink I`m gonna be sick. I might be a strictly Erik freak but I love Jack, too. I just like Erik`s name better. But Ed and Al? They`re brothers! when wil you Elricest fans get that through your thick skulls?!?! But if you were to make another FMA+Titanic fanfic, read some Ed+Winry first! They are the perfect pairing for a fanfic like this, beilieve me! If you are hurt by my words, I`m sorry. But get used to critiscism like this when you are a writer. I am also a writer, and I`ve gotten lots of critiscism on my stories as well. But what I`m trying to say is that from my perspective, this story is just plain wrong.

^^ Believe me, it was well worth the wait! I'm getting so interested in this story, I was so excited to see that you had updated. I hope you can continue it soon!

Ah! Ever since reading about this idea on your profile I was hoping for the day when you'd post it!! And I was not disappointed! -grins- It was everything I'd hope it'd be, and the twist you're putting to the whole 'Titanic' storyline has me sqeeing in happiness!^-^ I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Good story so far! I look forward to reading more. Thanks for writing!

Wahh Mokona hasn't even heard of Titanic and this fic was good!!

Aw, that was so sweet!
I was afraid for a moment, because I was thinking, "Oh, man. Are they not brothers in this story?"
And then you totally saved it for me.
Though, I'm still curious as to see how they got seperated, since it's pretty obvious Al didn't know his own brother was on the ship.
And I like how you made Al as Rose. That really is awesome. He's a lot more feminine than Ed is anyway. [Which is why sometimes I don't understand why people make Al seme and Ed as the uke.]
I hope you do the car scene, too. lol. That's like, my favorite. M, sexy.
Anyway, great job.
Please post more- I think it'd be an insult to fanfiction itself if you didn't.
Love&Cookies,
Aku.

You know, I can barely remember a thing from the film, it's been so long since I saw it. Never mind though, I'll just enjoy this retelling instead. ;) It's a promising start, can't wait to see what comes next.

You should definitely continue. This is a good start to what is most likely going to be a great... let's say... parody... of the movie. Elricest is the best! I liked the movie though...