oMFg!1! kASPER YOU AR LIEK TEH BEST STORIE RITER EVAH!1111ONE!

i ARE SRSLY, PLZ.

lIEKK, RED SUM OF MI STORIES i WOOD LIEK 2 C WUT YOU THINK!

omg this is the best story ever, shut up all you guys, stop putting Kasper down

Jesus, dude. I'd rather be raped then read this.

Uhh...let's just let Queen explain...

Queen: Listen, don't stop writing. Take this as my suggestions:

1. Get a better spellchecker.

2. What's with the square?

3. Every1? No,no,no. Take the time to type out one.

the title. Type "Everyone hates Tails because he is better".

this junk and make sure you take a good look at it before putting it up again.

6. *Waves goodbye* You're probably gonna get banned for all your bad stories. Just make them better before someone reports.

Both: Just..improve.

Mandy and Queen

Kasper, listen.

A cry for attention does not have to be a piece of crap. So I recommend you just delete this and create something else to get attention. I am not flaming you, I'm just saying this is the second worst story I've ever read.

Learn to spell Tails, cut out the face I know is there, and actually take the time to write out "face".

Other things you should learn to spell: Knuckles, Amy, writing, One, really, good, story, wait, everyone, read, said, hate, was, then, can't, to, knows, wronh, published, mad, really, likes, happy, because, better, writer, is, person, Rouge, bat, couldn't, kill.

This is how it should have been written.

"One day, Tails was writing a really good story. He couldn't wait to show everyone! Knuckles read it first and said: "That is horrible, Tails! I hate you a lot." Tails was sad. Then he shows Amy. Amy said: "Tails, you can't write at all! Go away now!" But Tails knew he could write well, but everyone he had shown it to hated it!

Then Tails got his story published and proved them all wrong! Knuckles was mad because he thought the story was really bad. Everyone now liked the story! Tails was happy then.

Then Sonic got mad because Tails was a better writer than he was and so he punched Tails! Tails did not like that either so he flew away because he was rich now, and therefore decided he didn't need them. Tails was then a happy fox then: he loved life!

That night, when he was sleeping, Rouge the Bat cut off his tails and he couldn't fly! Then, they killed him!"

Boy, I sound awful when I give critiques. Please, for the sake of my sanity, hell, everyone's sanity, for the love of God: Make a better grammar! Proofread your work!

P.S. I'm sure someone else will report this, i,e. a grammar stickler. So leave it up while it lasts. And I know that what Amy and Knuckles said are what people said to you. If you want that to stop, then just improve your grammar and spelling. Get a spell-checker if you have that much trouble writing.

ok i'm a huge tails fan but you can't just start typing lyke tis ind espect all to take u serosly, i mean OMFG my eyes bleed when they look at this. if you're a tails fan i'm cool with that, but please learn english before you destroy all that is literature!

oh and if your just writing like this for attention, everyone hates it and hope to see you burning in hell.

but if you are really tring to write but just can't because you are illiterate (not able to write well) then please like the comment said on your other story, get help. and may God have mercy on your soul.