for one thing, i dont agree with the pairings, but i guess you're following Rowling's pairings. I almost forgot about Fred, and I feel awful for it, all my imaginary fics (I say imaginary, because otherwise you might look at my profile, and realise i havent actually written any HP fics) have Fred in it. lol, im gettign off topic. anyway, also, maybe you should replace the word "damn" with something more...uh... suitable. :) but it was, i think better than the original.

Aww! so sweet!

That was a great ending. I loved it more than J.K. Rowling's!

So, I just found this! Super cute! :) Harry is cute with his new daddyness! :):)

By the way...I'm tacopacket from lj. hehe

I have to say this was so good! I actually liked most of DH but yeah, that epilogue bummed me out. This was a better version I think. Nice job! :)

I think I like your epilouge a bit better... =D
vg

Your writing is amazing; you're incredibly talented. I absolutely adored your ending.

Great epilogue! I liked most of DH, but I was so disspaointed by the epilogue. It told virtually nothing but their kids names...

this really is a wonderful ending because i too thought the real epilogue was a bit unsatisfying.Great job

wow. i think this is better than the DH epilogue! excellent job. and i agree with you about DH. it wasn't satisfying at all... very disappointing.

I hate the epilogue too! I mean who in the right mind names there kid 'ALBUS SEVERUS?' That is the worst name in the world. And why the hell was everyone having sons?huh? I mean all the weasleys are guys except for Ginny, then Lupin and tonks had a boy and then Harry and GInny had two boys and Hermione and Ron had a guy too and Draco! Grr...we need more daughters over here!

Truly excellent! I just loved it!

I have to agree with you about Rowling's ending, especially the cliched names. You came up with a very good alternative to the epilogue. Great work!
whitewolf

Now that was pretty neat. Good job!

I have to disagree with you about DH, but your version of the epilogue was really great too. I loved the part about James having Harry's own blood.