poor Bella! and Edward! he's so confused! and so is Bella! heck im confused! please update soon...!

luve,

Fairy!

This fanfic is really interesting. I've never read anything quite like this. I really think it's a good idea, though. :)

Ok, I think I've answered my own question. This is after Edward's come back, and before Eclispe... right? I'm a little bit confused about that.

How could Bella ever tell Edward, in short, to go away? They love each other!

Wait. May I ask what time period this is set in in the books?

Hi, um... is there going to be more to this story? I really like it far! Please write me back.

Brynn

I realize this story is ancient, but it rocks!

wow, it's quite good so far, even with the short chapters.

WOW...LOVE IT!update!

Update please! If you do, I'll be sure to read.

this is really good so far, update soon!

-sillytoast156-

First, just a note - it's way easier on your readers if you don't post half-chapters, because we don't get alerts for changes made and such. I know people'll probably bug you about updating, but they'll bug you more about chapters 3 paragraphs long. :)

As I said before, I like this story, and will continue reading it. _

i'm kind of confused with everything...but maybe thats how you ment it to be and you'll explain later? idk... but could you make the chapters a little longer, pretty please? i can't wait to see where you are going with this story

i agree i would like it a lot more if the chapter were longer. but it's still good. please update soon.

It's good, I like it - I'd like it more if the chapters were longer, though. :)

This story is absolutly amazing so far! I love it! Please post the next chapter soon!