I can see this happening. Luna is direct, and sees things in a slightly different manner than most of us. I believe she is a seer, or possibly she sees not one future, but many possible ones. her abilities, combined with her witnessing her mother's death might well have pushed her overt he edge. I'd hate to see what happens when she get's angry.

Not caring that she was barefoot in the cold is so very much like Luna. My wonder is why didn't any of the staff notice the bullying? My guess is Dumbledore. He may have decided it was unnecessary to 'the greater good' to actually care about his students.

A very good example of that is a story on Ficwad called 'like some old song you can't unlearn. Unfortunately, I did not write it. *Sigh!*

Harry's solution is both direct and rather intimidating.

Well done, sez I!

In the event you decide to continue this, I have placed it on my alerts list.
Alorkin

Ok, I’ll say this up front, I’m not a Harry Potter fan.

But you pulled a rabbit out of your hat. This was a very touching story. You are bringing out the kind of emotion that I like to read. Of course, I would expect no less from, an ‘old salt’, such as yourself (this guy wrote a date scene for one of my stories and it kicked butt). It’s good to see that you got your muse back.

Your scene description is outstanding and a pleasure to read. I have a lot to learn in that department (pacing).

Lord Saturn

RM, many p but sweet.

Kind of sweet, and sad to say a better romance then half the fics that devote thousands of words and tons of chapters to a pairing but use such hard handed tactics it's usualy instant 'I hate you, I love you' switches.

That being said the story could of been improved, for such a short story it had more then a few plot holes. Like Harry apparating in hogwarts, which is not supposed to be able to be done just to get some how chocolate something a house elf could of done. Then there is the fact that not a single magical solution to their problems occured to them. This is supposed to be Harry's 7th or 6th year and something like a warming charm never occured to him?

It was a cute scene but it could of used improvement, especialy for any one who wanted to make a bigger story out of it. Not to mention Harry helping luna with her problems with dormates hiding her things is perhaps the most cliche way to make them friends, and kind of sad when done so late in her school life. It generaly a nicer gesture if done within her first few years, not one of Harry's last after suposively knowing her since at least the DA in 5th year.

cute i like it

you're a really good writer

aaw, that's so sweet. very good portrayal of the two greatest characters in all of Harry Potter. :D

Oh my gosh, that was SO sweet! Would you mind if I borrowed this plot, changed it a bit, and then continued it? I would COMPLETELY understand if you said no, so don't worry about hurting my feelings. ;D I just think this is so great, and I couldn't stand to leave it. GREAT JOB!!
Sincerely signed,
Shizuku Tsukishima749 :D ;D :) ;)

P.S.- Don't forget to answer my question! lol.

aww that was short and sweet

umm, okay. this was good.