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Scarlet Tigress 1/12/12 . chapter 1
I feel like crying in the very worst and very best way possible. What a powerful piece! So...so lovely! Your skill as an author is truly profound, to build so much emotion into so few words. You make the story of a whole life into just a few powerful pages. Amazing. You have my admiration on every level.
I'll Do It Tomorrow 12/29/11 . chapter 1
I pretty much burst into tears after reading this. I was so sad when Naruto told Sasuke he was getting married. Truthfully, I wanted to punch Naruto.

It was an amazing story
jaetime 12/12/11 . chapter 1
This is it? NOOOOOOOOO /WAILS/ IT WAS SO GOOD AND IT HAD TO END ABRUPTLY.

Ending aside, I cried. The emotions were beautifully written and I enjoyed every minute reading this. Their emotions were spot on and the transition was very well done. Definitely going into my favourites. Any thoughts on a sequel?
KnightMareLove 11/21/11 . chapter 1
Oh! This was just way too good. I loved it. The time skips really pronounced just how strong their relationship was. I probably would have been pissed if I found out my lover was getting married to another, but since it turned out to be Sakura who loved both Sasuke and Naruto I felt that it was alright. Plus, she ended up dying anyways. Great story. Great writing. Great job at keeping in-character. Happy open ending!
doodlertoday 11/21/11 . chapter 1
I don't actually know how to say how much I loved this...

Bloody fantastic...

Should defo have more reveiws...
xxUchihacest 11/10/11 . chapter 1
too good for words. utterly awesome. the emotion you've created is intense and completely drew me in. Loved it.
KibaDoctor-Luva 11/4/11 . chapter 1
Awww! It's so sad D: I love it though, it's so so so so so so so so sooooo sweet! I cried at the end, your such a talented writer to be able to make the reader feel the emotions the charector is feeling!

Your a great writer, fantastic. Beleive it! Heh, couldn't resist. The story was great, so cute and nice and I could go on and on and on and on!

It's one of the best stories I've ever ever read! Great work!
TheHiddenAngel 8/31/11 . chapter 1
i love it, kinda sad didnt think it was ganna end happily at first glad it did though
naash 5/24/11 . chapter 1
i love your summary and the one shot too. amazing
Leli 5/2/11 . chapter 1
I started crying somwhere around the middle and I still can't stop.
fallen-forgotten-faith 2/7/11 . chapter 1
wow.

I loved how much of a roller-coaster it was. I started off pretty sad, then I got kinda happy, and it broke my heart when Naruto announced he was getting married and he missed that one night.

but the ending was optimistic and sweet. (:

great :D
SerialAuthor 2/4/11 . chapter 1
There was just something really amazing about that.
nothingbutmisory 1/3/11 . chapter 1
a very creative story for real never read better i just love it the way the actions turns out really great exellent job love your stories and enjot reading them
c7bi-kyuubi 11/7/10 . chapter 1
BRAVO! Such a touching story Love it!
Sighcoe 11/1/10 . chapter 1
Wow. I don't know what to say. Its... its written so well and the idea behind it is so adorable. There's only a phrase, a word? I find off the whole story, 'and he saw stars' hehehehe... that was during Sasuke and Naruto's fight inside Naruto's head.

Anyway, I heart this.
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