So beautifully written, 'Redemption' was a lovely read. Your characterization of Draco was brilliant. It was heartbreaking to learn that he couldn't save Hermione if he tried. Well done! You should be so proud of this. :)

That was so good. I almost wish it would continue, but it's wonderful as a one shot. Really, really good.

"my fantasies of Draco Malfoy as Head Boy and Hermione Granger as Head Girl, of this absurd dream that I would save her, that she would ever love me, that I was just some fool"

the depth...

I absolutely adore this story. I think you got Draco spot on. Yes, he is a coward, but he's a coward with a conscience. I love how you portrayed his comprehension of the cruelty of the war-the realization that he didn't care about blood status a smuch as he thought if it meant that people had to suffer the way Hermione did.

At first I was hesitant to read this because it sounded very Draco/Hermione, and I've never liked that pairing, but upon reading it I realized that it's not Draco/Hermione per se; it's Hermione being used to demonstrate aspects of Draco's character that can only be hinted at in the books.

Your style is beautiful, and I love the little bit towards the end: "Aunt Bella only cowered in her pathetic manner before him as he tortured her, something I sensed, that they both enjoyed very much." Creepy, disturbing, but a spot on depiction of the relationship between Bellatrix and Voldemort.

I loved it, really. Fabulous job.

wow that was amazing!you are an amazing writer.

omg that was so awesome! i wish the book had more of draco in it. are you going to continue?

That was absolutely amazing and I totally loved it. I had hoped Dramione would get together in the final book, but of course I knew that it looked like JKR was heading toward R/Hr instead. Unfortunately...

But, OMG, what is really weird is that I had that kind of scenario running through my head as I read the "Malfoy Manor" chapter, and then I wrote a story on here about it! Not along the same exact lines, of course, but still...I just find that pretty strange.

But anyway...this was an incredible pov. Draco definitely is a coward, but a very, very loveable one who should have been with Hermione. Although I'm sad you didn't end it like that, I still like the ending and just, overall, the whole story. Thank you for a fantastic read.

that was really good. what you wrote was running through my mind when i read that chapter in the book. good job!

wow. that was powerful. i like how it was still pretty much the book, bu these were the deleted scenes. good job

That was really good. I was wondering Draco's thoughts as I read that.

Oh my God...

That was so beautiful...

But SO SAD...

It's worth a cry...

I had hoped Draco and Hermione would end up together beofre reading the 7th book, but I knew it was impossible...

At least Draco's nice now...

This was really good. You got inside Draco and really told a brilliant story. Darco was very much scared, confused and very human. This was really good. You wrote everyone perfectly. You should do a few follows. this was a very good read.

that was SSOO good! Omg I loved it! goes to my favs..