|Reviews for Lara Croft: Ancient Artifacts|
| AssortedScribbler 7/5/06 . chapter 2
My god, mud fight? You gotta get writing and finish this! And could you put in some desriptive stuff? Just for me?
| Darlian 8/15/04 . chapter 2
Hilarious! I love Alex/Lara fics. The script-style format is neat. Keep it up!
| Jennifer Jolie 5/30/02 . chapter 2
*throws slime at tompson*
| Jennifer Jolie 5/30/02 . chapter 1
Mmmm. Nice! But isn't Lara supposed to be a top Tomb Raider if there is such a thiNG? Surely they'd pay for rooms.
| Lia 4/1/02 . chapter 2
| Iara 12/26/01 . chapter 2
Ohhhhhhh...Please continue soon
| DixieGoddess 10/3/01 . chapter 2
hehehehehe! it's funny! and good! this is sorta a humor 2.
| Mr. X 8/26/01 . chapter 2
Sorry but things are just really weird
| Severa1 7/26/01 . chapter 1
I'll try to be gentle about this. It's far too fast moving. Is it suppose to be script like? Then get trid of "The Narrator" and just put the actions in brackets or italics. I doubt Lara agreeing to a job *that* quickly, no questions asked. If it's going to be a dialouge centred, fic, then we need better dialouge. Damn, that didn't come off as gentle, did it? I tried. Sorry.
| Sparkle 7/26/01 . chapter 2
Cute story :) Continue
| Lexie Jayne 7/26/01 . chapter 2
In the novelisation Lara threatened to walk around naked rather than wear a dress. Sack the narrator unless this is shaping for a comedy.
But this could rock
| Ellie Grant 7/26/01 . chapter 2
Has the makings of a good story. Enlarge on the plot. Ditch the narrator. Make Lara ...well, more like Lara. She's very uncharacteristic. A dress? Honestly, I think she'd rather go naked if there was nothing to wear!
| Username Grimm 7/25/01 . chapter 2
Very out-of-character. And what's up with the Narrator thing? Don't get me wrong, I think the plot has potential but get it needs work. If you're interested, I'll beta-read for you.
| Dr Gonzo 7/24/01 . chapter 1
It's obvious you put alot more effort into ths then the makers of the film did so I congratulate you. Ihope to see more from you.