 NicotineDragon 5/25/04 . chapter 6An awesome story, only one thing that bugs me. If Johnny is Dibs dad, then how did Dib end up with Membrane? |
 Z 4/19/03 . chapter 6 yes of corse they only share a few chromasone pairs nothing beyond that.. |
 IrkenZikira 12/24/01 . chapter 6 oooooo...im starting to enjoy these Like father, like son crossover thingies...and i haven't ever read JTHM |
 Maniacal Dragon 12/13/01 . chapter 6Wow, good story! Very suspenseful, and you did a great job defining the nature of that thing behind the wall! It's always open to interpretation; exactly what that thing is and it's relationship to Nny, and you did a very nice job of it! I'm still trying to puzzle out that wall thingey for my story.. |
 Classified 11/9/01 . chapter 6 U must right more. This is way to suspenseful. (Wow, I didn't know I could spell that word.) What was that D-boy? |
 Sonikku Senshi 10/10/01 . chapter 6Very entertaining, but I expected as much from Chaotica. n.n I love the style. It always seems to fit together as one big thing, and never goes off course. The wording is great; makes you think about what it means. You can't just rush through some of the things, as I've learned. Anyone who likes to read quickly has no reason to be here, because their probably posting about how it made no sense. :D It just proves who's that smart author. Right? n.n ::Pats Chaotica.:: The guys at school love ya. Today, we printed about five hundred things of yours. Keep it up! |
 Hogulus 9/7/01 . chapter 6Yup... rules. Keep writing! |
 Invader Miraza 8/28/01 . chapter 6 wow that was soo cool |
 Jibaku-Chan 8/26/01 . chapter 6Nngghh...this story is so cool...please tell me this isnt the end! |
 kitt4 8/23/01 . chapter 6Whoo-hoo! Oh, how I love this story. Your talent leaves me at a loss for words (well, except for the words I just typed...). There are also some wonderful explanations about the memory loss issue. ::applauds:: Now please finish. |
 ArmAndLeg 8/22/01 . chapter 6Arm: One word: Cool. Leg: _ Oh boy, I'm lovin' this. Arm: Yeah, so get the next chapter up soon, Chao! Please? Leg: Yeah, please? |
 Amethyst Soul 8/22/01 . chapter 5. I've already read everything but I'll review anyway because it's *so good*! Great job. You take your stories the way most people wouldn't take them, and I like that. It's completely unexpected and it makes your work so awesome. |
 Invader Bast 8/10/01 . chapter 4Ohhhhh...write the next part mortal! |
 Caca-chan the Almighty nsi 8/9/01 . chapter 4 Oh my Jesus..
Eye luff ewe |
 Amethyst Soul 8/9/01 . chapter 4Awesome, as ALWAYS. A refreshing thing to read after being cut off for so long from reality... of FFN... x.x I look forward to more. MORE. Poor Zim . |