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| Luigi Rules 512 2007-07-30 ch 1,  | abuseI don't like it. I hate that bastard Mario, and you use the & symbol too much. Is it truly that hard to type A-N-D? I'm not flaming, I just hate Mario. So very, very much. |
| Walkazo 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, and yes, very sad. Most people agree that Morton is Bowser's father's name since one of his kids is named Morton Jr., but whatever name works for you is fine. One bit of advise, you should start new paragraphs each time someone new speaks, it make things a bit easier to read. You've gots of little details here (like Mario's sister), and I hope you write more to actually flesh them out. Later! |