 Imouto 2009-11-30 . chapter 9 Probably my favorite chapter so far because the story gives a...gritty feel to Natsuki's past. It was believable as to how she became an escort. Now for the next chapter! |
 Reader#1618 2009-11-02 . chapter 6 I wanted to know what happened after the kiss, but I guess I can use a Chapter from FuFu to help the imagination ;)
Overall, great work. Love the jealousy coming from every angle. |
 Bleeding Hopes 2009-10-10 . chapter 16wo :) Being a long time since I've been on. First thing I had to read was this. woot. O: SHIZURU! NO! stupid Yuri, good thing for blowing his head off -thumbs up- And Thanks for the update! ^_^ |
 chum-sa 2009-10-09 . chapter 16oh...it's good to see u again! Thank for update! |
 Harley Quinn Davidson 2009-10-08 . chapter 16OH SNAP! love it can not wait for more |
 7thSoccerHokage 2009-10-08 . chapter 16Long time reader, first time reviewer. Great chapter! Really dramatic. Please say that Shizuru lives!
I'm a big fan of your stories, and I'm glad you're back. Keep up the good work! |
 Nai89 2009-10-08 . chapter 16Hey, neat story. Very different and dramatic.
I'm looking forward to an update. ^_^ |
 renkhal 2009-10-07 . chapter 16This is good. I think I'm hooked. |
 silverice90 2009-10-07 . chapter 16Amazing installment, Im glad I got to read it today :). Haruka always has Natsuki and Shizuru's backs it seems, which it awesome. Thank you very much for the update :) |
 Ume sama 2009-10-07 . chapter 16Natsuki... slept around D: (was this earlier on in the story? Man I need to really reread some of it X.X)
Nice update, can't say that we all aren't busy with everything we all do, but thanks for the update ^_^ |
 Xxshinig4mixX 2009-10-07 . chapter 16lol n1...
but tt was pretty much v sudden and a cliffhanger
but still welcomne back ^^
u said tt th last time 2 me o0 XD
^^ JY with writing |
 young grasshopper 2009-10-07 . chapter 16 hallelujah! a veteren! good to know you're still alive! thank you for the awesome chapter! lot of suspense
hope you can update this real soon! |
 dsaANON 2009-10-07 . chapter 16YAY! \(^0^)/ ur back! woohoo!
luv the update, it was intense wif the sooting n the bleeding and the arrest! im glad u resovled the arrest though it wud hav made me overly anixous to read the nxt chapter! >.< (well i am already wif shizuru still shot n all)
lukin 4ward to ur nxt update ^-^ |
 Kuro Shikon 2009-10-07 . chapter 16No Shizuru, she cant die! U can't kill her, please don't make her die! I'm glad that Yuri gur got what he deserve, I do hope Shizuru was telling the truth about the gun. I must see what happens next, please update soon! |
 colorfulsunrise514 2009-10-06 . chapter 16Oh my gosh! Totally unexpected. Peace first then action comes busting through the door! When the two shots fired and Natsuki yelling, I got serious butterflies! A very splendid chapter. |