Reviews for Rite of Slumber, Part 1: A Murmur In The Dark

Reviews For: Rite of Slumber, Part 1: A Murmur In The Dark

Pandassassin 2008-01-01 ch 7,	abusealright, so far so good kinda creepy with the crotch torture ur giving the characters but whatever lol btw u should pair Lyner up with Misha, well actually its stupid of me to be saying this now since this story is already completed lol well ill just "hope" that u chose misha lol
Salary Dam 2007-10-10 ch 17,	abuse... NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICE NICCE-Eh...>~< Wasting of page,eh? Nice work~waiting for part 2!!
kojiros 2007-09-21 ch 16,	abusehmm...the first half with Luke I kinda didn't really get. o_- now did I understand how Mimas was weakened...I know by hatred but I didn't catch when she received and from whom -_-. Well the last quarter was clear enough XD She's dead, good. AS for your request unfortunately I don't knwo how to make a new catergory -_- It's been a while since i last wrote anything. I'll experiment around and get back to ya...o_-
kojiros 2007-09-21 ch 15,	abuse...wow ...dood all I have to say to that is that Aurica...has got some balls O_o or breasts or something... that was funny as heck. I wouldn't have done it at all. I'da sung everyone to death if they were THAT perverted >_>
kojiros 2007-09-21 ch 14,	abuseWOW O_O 14 was amazing. I have to admit dood I had a strong hunch it was Mimas after everyone started acting outta character had desires for other people like crazy. I think Ayatane's case confirmed it for me XD AHAHAHAHAHHA!! That was hilarious my friend really hilarious! XD I've enough hatred to kill her myself! >:{ Dang that wasn't very pretty... Tho I'd be feeling very very...awkward to say the least if my 3 girlfriends were all naked before my very eyes and dind't seem to care... >_>Sweet chapter but man that fight sucked for them... -_- I guess he has to be farther then lvl 99 to conquer her XD (Which my party is btw ^.^)
kojiros 2007-09-21 ch 13,	abuseI'm sorry meh friend I've been reading up to chapter 11 and haven't had time to read further in a while XD I'll take that offer to Lemon Meringue pie or the French Silk. I'm game cause I LOVE YOUR SORY SO FAR! XD When they were running form the factory at sound-breaking speeds I knew Misha would slip or something (have you seen those shoes of her O_o my gosh!) So she crafted a new song on the spot eh? De ja vu yet again ^.^ This chapter was pretty sweet and I'm enjoyin git a lot I should be in Philosophy class RIGHT NOW but I'm here reading your fanfic cause I'm crazy/devoted like that XD Keep it up I'ma marathon the rest of the chapters right now as well (up to 16) ^.^
kojiros 2007-08-18 ch 7, anon.	abuseI really like this as well ^_^ I loved how you kept Misha's boldness intact! XD She can pounce like that anyday for me ^.^ Keep it up man I'll definitely be looking forward to the rest. And like the former I'm glad to see at least one Ar Tonelico fic. I'm gonna start my own soon too ^_^ Look forward to it and I you.
Tsuki no Eizo 2007-08-17 ch 7, anon.	abuseNice story. Finally glad to see there's a fic for Ar Tonelico, it's one of my favorite games. Can't wait for the next update.

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