 JuseaPeterson 2008-03-19 . chapter 1I hear you on the whole nostalgic feeling. I did too. I like your approach to the stories better than the one I wrote after it. :)
Good job on this. It felt like I was reading the book again, Harry, Ginny and Ron were in character, including the descriptions of the characters. I like how you kept in Ron not exactly liking the idea of them together, but still pushing them together.
Harry's outburst and then Ginny's response fit in quite well.
Really good job. |