I LOVED this! Great job! Hehe, Ron was so...Ron. And I loved Shego; I've kinda always seen her as their gaurdian angel or w/e (when she isn't trying to kill them). Great, great job! (: Loved it.

Angelica

great story, i love rons character, he's the perfect ideot. he does something stupid and it all works out.

Shego's character is really well done, so is Drakkens lol "Drakken smiled like a toddler who had just mastered the potty ..." possibly one of the best lines ever put into fanfiction ^^

Ron acts like a jerk with Kim at first, but a believable jerk. Kim blowing up about him calling her "KP" is just a symptom of much bigger grievances, and the arguement is well handled.

Shego deciding to balance her evil career with becoming Kim and Ron's guardian angel (when she's not trying to kill them) is a an unusual twist, but I like it.
It seems unlikely how friendly Shego is to Ron because she's not on the clock, but it makes some sense really. Odd that she wants them to keep foiling her and Drakken.

I'm not a great fan of songfics, but lyrics actually help the story.

Good work. Thanks.

Excellent!

MK2

I really enjoyed this fic, though I must say that I enjoyed the original a little bit better. It's not that you messed up or anything, I was just feeling in the angsty mood and this is more of a K/R fluff.

Loved how you portrayed each character. Everyone was ic, and even Shego managed to take something back from her talk with Ron.

You said that you would keep the original up, right? Well, I can't seem to find it anywhere!

Keep up the good work.

karenstern05

The Redux is just as good as the original. Nice take on their and Kim and Ron's relationship and Shego's perspective to them.

i enjoyed it, great story.

Wow, this was a surprisingly good fic, without quite all the drama that I was expecting. That outsiders perspective from Shego really was something, although it was interesting to note that even she walked away with a few things to think about as well, even if she did try to rationalize her reasons for trying to help the "buffoon" and the "princess" in the first place. I also like seeing how Ron was able to fess up to his short-comings and actually vow to work on them, and it didn't hurt that Kim had enough time to think about her own "issues" as well.

“They can carry the bubonic plague!”
“They can?”
“Weren’t you paying attention in history class?”
“Were you?”
“Well, no, but I remembered that!”
“So not the drama.”

I'm sure there are others out there, but it was nice reading an honest to goodness extended lovers spat between KP and RS. Enjoyed the humorous dialog, especially the lines above that capture the essence of both main characters: classic. And this fanfic shows that the Shego character is one of the most intriguing villians out there in cartoon land.

thatbwas asome

You know, this is more of an "lets all poke at all of Ron's character short-comings, make up stuff about him that Kim finds irritating(I was going WTF at Kim's anger on the 'KP' pet-name) while putting Kim on a pedestal" kind of fic. I'm just a reader, but I found the characters, especially Kim and Ron, disgustingly OOC.

I remember the original, but love this redux. A wonderfully written story of how all the little things can snowball. Liked how both sidekicks recieved a little insight.

Excellent redux (though I have yet to read the orig). Though Kenny Rogers recently did a cover of "buy her a rose", which is what drew my attention. Being a country boy I tend to like his better ;) Still, it all holds together excellently

"The oven ominously said nothing." Definitely reminds me of a passage from one of my fave books where the author talks about a refrigerator that "lurks menacingly in the corner"

*l* only bad point... Kim cooking the rats might have been a bit over the top. where would she even get rats in the clean Possible household unless she went out and hunted them.

this could get you tossed out of the KiGo club LOL!

Nice work, beeftony; this sounds like someone who's been and lived through the Ron Stoppable sitch. Nice use of Shego, and without her inflicting pain on anyone: this could be a first!

Glod flow, and good pacing: nice use of multiple scenes and flashbacks, as well.

all in all, a nice story, beeftony.

...cpneb

Nice story. I think you presented all four (five if one counts Ned) characters very well. Of course it may be said with some fairness that I'm a sucker for stories with a lot of conversation in them... But I digress. Well done, I enjoyed it.

KiY