Love it!

Seriously woman. I'm going to become independently wealthy and hire you to sit in a creative place and pen Superman stories for me all day!

I loved it! LOVED. IT!

I love your way with witty banter! The use of Perigee to describe how they would get back together just before they did. Everything reads liek a movie screen the way your describe it and I find myself sad that you have but 3 stories for me to devour!

Which I'll cope with because I plan to read them all multiple times.

That was a wonderful read. I really love the way you write Lois and Clark. You have a deep understanding and genuine fondness for the characters, and that is very evident in your characterization of them. And you took me to the highs and lows of emotion. I felt frustrated as Lois was, heartbroken as Clark was, and then warm and happy as they both were in the end. This was a lovely little journey, and I thank you for it.

I hope more Superman stories arise from your keyboard. You play with the triangle-built-for-two so incredibly well.

I've read this story on four separate occasions in as many months. Even knowing what's coming, I still return to it. So I figured it was about time I try to give you the praise you deserve.

I love every character, but I think your supporting characters almost steal the show from Clark and Lois. Richard's "worst moments" were hilarious, and Martha Kent is so perfectly in character as a doting, concerned mother. And Jason! Normally, when he's included, I find people to write him either too young or too wise, but I think you've found his voice really well.

Please write more Superman fic, I <3 it. :D Actually, it doesn't even have to be Superman. Just give me what you got, I'll take anything!

Please write more you are so talented. Your sense of both conversations and the timing of things- it is excellant

In my first posted review for your story, "Franz Kafka's Girlfriend", I didn't realize you had just one other story - this one. The discovery broke my heart.

Don't get me wrong, I love this story too. I love the way you write one of the most enduring and greatest love stories of all time. You have a way of treating Lois and Clark with respect and loving attention. You have a way of getting into their essence and depicting them in absolute truth. You have a way of telling their story where I fall in love with their story all over again. I adore that.

With that in mind, I'm imploring you to write again, to write more - because you know, I noticed that your stories are dated in 2007. As I've said, it broke my heart not having any more of your stories to read. You have such talent. Please grace us with more. Pretty please?

Love the ending. Can't stop laughing.

Loved the entire thing, but I have to say, the way you wrote Lois (ESPECIALLY in chapter three) had me envisioning Margot Kidder as Lois. GREAT work.

wow.
I was skimming over authors' favorites, one led to another and then i stumbled over this
wow.
i've never actually been that aquainted with the superhero/comics fandom, except for the summer blockbusters, but i'm afraid thats all i know; and i've never particularly been a fan of superman. Something about it just seemed so fake to me, i mean a guy that has a pair of glasses for a disguise, come on!It was so ridiculous
But then i read this, and it brought a sense of reality to the whole thing, and your dialouge! it's so crazy it blows me away. i'd give anything to have that kind of talent where lines just fit perfectly, and are so simple and profound that they just ...wow. I could totally see in my head the scene where clark was trying to tell lois the secret and he had his glasses off and everything ...and then she doesn't even notice. It was so sad and perfect!
huh...that is the longest review i have ever written..im sure your tired now ...so ill just shut up xD
Kudos to an amazing talent!

I wanted to comment on this really sweet story, and to congratulate you on winning your awards over at livejournal.! The only reason I'm reading your stories is because of that website!

Again, I printed out a bunch of stories to read while on vacation, and this one was my favorite by far... the reveal, Lois's little push, Jason's help, Richard's actions (a total gentleman), and the ending had me laughing and crying!

Again, congratulations!:D

Ok i know this fic was written a while ago but i just had to say..

holy crap.

The freakin BEST Lois/Clark smartass dialogue i've ever read. Seriously awesome!

I maay have reviewed this fic before... it's just that it makes me so happy!

:D

I adore Richard. I adore Richard and Lois together. Strangely, I also adore Clark and Lois together. I have no idea HOW you wrote a break-up between Richard & Lois in a way that I actually still LIKED both characters afterward. I think it's because you've given all 3 people in this triangle very well-rounded characteristics, all human, all likable and just so... darned... WELL-Written!

My favourite part has to be this though:
“So,” Richard exhaled, “he’s abandoning you to a life of lonely spinsterdom and ...cats,” she looked at him sharply, “probably...and I’m offering you a wonderful life, a new opportunity, safety, security and stability for you and your child that isn’t mine. And yet, you still say no?”

She nodded sadly.

“Okay, I changed my mind. This is the worst moment of my life.”

*L*
Thanks so much for writing this!

I'm here on a rec, and what a great tale! I particularly like stories where Richard is treated respectfully, and your use of Martha was fantastic, too!

Such a cute way to do the reveal... and that kiss at the end of Ch. 3? Wonderful. I also enjoyed the family epilogue. Great job!

I absolutely adore this story and all your Clark/Lois fics - I even put up a rec on my livejournal. Touching and humorous and honest, all at once. Great job!