Hello! I'm a french author and i'm hopeless in English, so 'scuse me for errors...
I like your story so much, because i love the pairing George/Fred...
If you want, i can be your "bêta lectrice"...
Continue, please!
Tchû!
£njoy!

C'est plutot pas mal bien qu'un peut court reste plus qu'a te trouver une bêta-lectrice(un correcteur pour les fautes!

I'm French and I love your fiction. It isn't in good french but it's very beautiful and interesting by my point of view.
BRAVO
And excuse me por my deplorable English.
Kiss

hi!
english is not my natural language (scuse the errors please)
I think your story is very good, interesting, and nice.
I have seen few errors (some french made these errors too so don't worried)
continue please
bye