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| cassandra phoenix 2008-09-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was recced and I really want to continue to read it, but the story is in need a of good and thorough beta for many grammar and spelling errors. |
| Gretchen 2008-09-02 ch 20, anon. | abuseThis was TOTALLY good from start to finish & I loved the whole thing! |
| Jaivaramongolid 2008-08-27 ch 20, | abuseOh god! that was an awesome story. I loved how in the end Dean wanted to hunt with Sam. and of course The lion thing, that was so sweet. I really hope there's a sequel*hint* |
| mb 2008-07-28 ch 20, anon. | abuseJust wanted to say I really enjoyed your story. The "what if?" situation seems very real... the failed attempt at counciling, Dean and Sam's estrangement through lack of shared interests, Sam's lying-everything really. Dean seemed very in character, willing to help/encourage his brother in less than goodie goodie activities but worried when he realizes something is really wrong. My favorite part must have been the ward escape-Sam really is smart and clever and I'm glad Sammy the lion made an appearence. Thanks for writing (I hope there's a sequal)! mb |
| the muse77 2008-07-12 ch 20, | abuseWow! I absolutely loved your story! You have a great writing style and I was hooked from Ch. 1. Also, even though it was AU you nailed the boys' personalities. I've noticed a lot with AU stories, their personalities get extremely altered. It's natural they are a bit different due to it being AU but when it gets to the point where they really aren't our Dean and Sam anymore it's no bueno! Anywho, nuff rambling! Great story and I hope to read more of your stuff! |
| stacylove 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseomg, LOVE. PLEASE say there's going to be sequel! I don't think my little heart can take it if ther's no more. I'm definately glad I found this. So far, this is my fav summer story! |
| nine 2008-06-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a favorite story of mine and i love it. Is there any way your going to a sequal? where sam teaches dean about the huntung world and his parents come to understand whats really going on with sam, and we learn what the hells up with mary? |
| Mangacat201 2008-06-03 ch 20, | abuseWoah... what an amazing story!! Bloody fantastic, I was bound from the first chap on and couldn't stop even for much needed sleep. You got me there.. this is exactly how I imagine it could have gone if Mary hadn't interrupted Az in the first place! And you gave me a whole bunch of new theories to mull over, thinking about Supernatural!! Ah, but don't dare NOT doing a sequel! Cat |
| Dark Toy 2008-05-24 ch 20, | abuseI just wanted to say that I liked this fanfic so much, that I have a copy of it in my email account just to read it when I have a spare moment at work. Have you considered doing a sequel? :) |
| surrealgreen 2008-05-18 ch 20, | abuseAwesome story! Very nice characterization. I like the way you did Mary--she's a bit of a wild card, but you played her nicely. |
| Monica 2008-03-27 ch 20, anon. | abuseOk, I totally loved this! Awesome job, great and very originally...sucked me in, actually...lol I read it all in one sitting, even though I have schoolwork I should probably be doing. Oh well it was totally worth it. Anyway, I really, really, really hope you're planning a sequel, because, well, honestly, I think I need one. Also, just wanted to tell you I've read most of your fic, not even realizing so many of the stories in my favorites are by the same author. You do wonderful work, please keep it coming! |
| mre_quecky 2008-03-20 ch 20, anon. | abuseWow, I really enjoyed reading this story! If the demon hadn't layed the fire, that would have been a really likely scenario. Loved it! |
| Cade 2008-03-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey - found this jem at the Supernatural Fanfiction Awards site and just had to tell you how much I loved it! It was a wonderfully written AU story. I was a bit worried that the boys weren't going to have the great bond that shows so well in the show, but you didn't disappoint! No SN story would be complete without that special bond and Bobby to boot! More please. CW |
| alphabet 2008-03-17 ch 20, | abuseThat was AMAZING. I loved how you wrote the Winchesters--still recognizable, but not exactly the same because they wouldn't be, now would they? The supporting cast was good, too. (Yay Bobby!) I admired and wanted to throttle both Sam and Dean, they both were trying so hard to do the right thing, but what is the right thing? So intriguing at the end there, I'm hoping for a sequel to delve into that? Thanks for writing this story! |
| Lilyblue 2008-03-10 ch 20, | abuseThis was a great fic and an interesting AU. It has elements of other fanfiction stories (Sam hunts, dean doesn't genre) but takes it in a totally diferent direction. The characterization was on spot and the Dean and Sam dynamic was wonderful! This was definitely unique and different, therefore fun to read. |