Me encantó!! estaré esperando el proximo capítulo.

Saludos desde Chile.

This is great and very interesting.

I like the larissa's rebel character. Can't wait to read you again. It's good!

Silence...so much awe with the diction. A realization just occurred with the of epic opus. Everything is utterly perfect! Of such caliber deserves nothing less than a descent and respectable review in turn. I feel so overwhelmingly honored and pleased for having read this! In just a chapter, you've already become a favorite author. Definitely, I will read Ascension too with so much gusto. Nice pen name by the way.

Interesting...very interesting.

I like how you have characterized Larissa and Miranda...they're familiar, but still different people from our Neptune and Uranus.

Great job! I hope you update soon!

You have piqued my curiosity =D There are so few fics written in this style, set in this time frame. I'm only sorry that it wasn't a longer chapter!

Cannot wait for a continuation - I really enjoy your fic, you are a very talented writer.

I don't usually read that many stories with Neptune and Uranus as their protagonist, but I really enjoyed your other Sailormoon story, so I gave this a shot. I liked the interaction between Larissa and Despina; royal courts wrought with petty jealously and rivalry are more interesting than some faux utopia. I am assuming you will use the anime and manga as a template for Larissa and Miranda. A rocking beginning to their relationship seems much more in tune with those personalities than some 'love at first sight' encounter.

An intriguing start. The ending scene especially. My big critique (and I always say, 'take it or leave it, it's your story,' when it comes to my critiques) is that there seems to be a lot of talking and not enough showing. That's why I liked the ending scene so much, not just because of the sparks between H&M ;) ; you show the action a lot more there. I definitely like the setup, though. But totally take your time in laying it out. Most authors on don't do enough of that. Like a good book, lay it out for us. Don't rush through it. Look forward to more chappies!