 blinkie 2007-08-02 . chapter 1This reminded me of that episode when Peppo mysteriously commented: "Your father is a man", or something like that! I totally shrieked when I heard that. It was hilarious! Anyway, back to your fic. This fic is nicely written without much vulgarity. You captured the 'dirtiness' of the deed without being too descriptive, which is how i like my lemons lol. One thing I noticed, a typo - "swallows", not "shallows". :P Great job!
~ blinkie |