Syrus. where art thou dearest Syrus. Oh hello yet again. no update on this ficlet. Come on i want to see who is next.

Syrus! Syrus! Syrus! Where shalt thy self be at this point.

Please update soon. i want to see another chapter with Syrus and Zane.

Wheres Syrus. Have the next chapter be where Syrus meets another group of vampires. except these vampires wont be so friendly and try to make a meal out of him when all of a sudden. Zane to the rescue.

got idea from Twilight. or instead of vampires be regular group of thugs looking for some "fun" and have Zane scare them off.

You ever gonna update or something. and can the next chapter be about Syrus. like he is walking around one night in melancholy rememberance of all his past betrayals and whatnot.

And see what Zane has got up his sleeve.

This is a very well written story; also, it was quite clever to use Zane and Syrus' Japanese last name for Zane and their dubbed last name for Syrus.

so when ya gonna update this story. And where is Syrus in all of this. And what is his deal with not trusting a lot people. And are you gonna introduce other vampires like the one from "30 Days of Night" or something. I love this story so much please update.

can you have it where Syrus has a reason for being suspicious of new people that claim to like him or wish to be his friend. Like he is secretly a rich kid and all those posers only liked him for his money or where he would make a friend and they would start to use him to do whatever. And so he is scared of trusting people for fear of that.

Oh and possibly make a chapter where Syrus happens to be in the middle of a vampire/hunter cross off and has to hide before they catch him.

Yo, Ya ever gonna update? Well. Sorry for the demand but this story rocks so much.

So can you have the next chapter where Syrus reappears.

Aww~ Come on, lets see how Syrus and Zane can fair together! XD

Wow, this had a pretty good plot-twisty-thingy-ma-bobber... I like saying "thingy-ma-bobber", it's an awesome made-up word... wait, that's aside the point, though.

Anyways... I would LOVE to help you out with making this a manga, only thing is my drawing isn't exactly Kazuki Takahashi, Natsuki Takaya, Makoto Raiku, Hiromu Arakawa or Rumiko Takahashi... (listed them because they're the pretty much the only manga writers I know) other wise, the only other thing is, it would take me forever to do... and knowing my parents and brothers, they would wanna see what I'm drawing since I never get peace from them...

I can see what I can do. I can borrow a few drawing anime guides from my sis/friend, and I'll see what happens. I'll let you know.

(P.S.: I do have a deviantart account (which may I point out I rarely use?), its "Coco-Gash-Jirachi", just in case you'd need to know that)

Let's just hope that Jesse doesn't start hitting on Jaden! I like Jesse, but not when he starts to like Jaden a little TOO much! THAT I can't really stand about their friendship, because everyone thinks they love each other! IT DRIVES ME NUTS!

There are two ways to get on my last nerve immediately! Either a person flames a story of mine, OR they mention Jesse and Jaden as a couple! Two VERY bad ways to get on my last nerve IMMEDIATELY!

Sorry. Anyway... the story is still great!

Can you have it where Syrus is a rich kid in secret but doesnt want anyone to know. and basically have that be the reason for his pessimism and distrust. you know people will usually only like you for money and material things.

Along with that can you put that in with my previous comment for this chapter.

Can the next chapter be where Syrus accidently witnesses the whole thing and the hunters fearing talk go after him but he manages to escape and then maybe the lord of vamps be Alucard from Hellsing. AH. alucard

Me won't flames! This chapter was great. Just makes me wanna know what happens next

That was... should I saw cool?