To say this story was awesome would be an understatement :D This is, by far, the best 'Toph's Origin' story I've read on the Pit, and I only wish that she'd hang around the Badgermole a little longer :) Great work! I'm recommending this for Avatard: The Last Mister's 'Fics that Do Not Suck' list!

It's good.

I loved it. There arn't enough good toph kid stories, but I really love them!

O! I loved this story... YOU MUST WRITE MORE! ^^

I am a huge Toph fan. ^^

Oh, I loved your story, you should make this into an actual story, showing er life and progression in her earthbending.

I just watched the commentary earlier today, and I loved the idea of Toph learning from a bagermole. I think you pulled it off amazingly well, though Toph seemed a little too mature for a five year old at a few points. Also Chizu is a believable character. Overall, it was great!

I usually like my oneshots long so that was very nice. That was a good Toph story, keep up the good work!

Excellent story. Very original concept, it was something I had never thought of or considered before. And your characterizations are great. Chizu is a nice OC, and very believable.

Toph is written very well, with the tiny exception of a spot or two where she seemed a little mature for a 5 year old. Still, it was nothing to detract from the story, and I can imagine her being a pretty precocious child. Her dialogue and interactions with Chizu and Poppy were excellent.

This was a great read, and I enjoyed it immensely. Fantastic work.

This is one of the most awesome stories I have ever read. You write an wonderful Toph. One of the best, even. This is also one of the most interesting story ideas I have read. I wondered the same thing in the DVD commentary for "The Blind Bandit." I'm glad you took the initiative to write about that incident of hers, badgermoles and all! Keep up the great work!

And with more Tokka, which makes you even more awesome in my book. ^_~

Wow! This was brillant! So... awe inspiring!

It was... I can't even form words to describe it. Awesome.

You are so talented in writing the characters!

My grandparents won't let me use the scanner, darn them. I'll have to be sneaky and by them some stuff. Teehee. Bribery, it works and hey, it may be sinful but I dun' care. MuahahAHAHAH!

Very long, but good at the same time. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Wow... That was amazing! Very, very, VERY good!

As usual I loved it! You should really send one of your oneshots to Dongbu Feng for the fan creation review.

Awesome! I like how you incorperated Toph's baggermole-type Earthbending into a story. It's really believable. It could actually be canon!

Great job and write more soon, please!

I love it. Great piece of writing. Keep up the good work.