Wonderful! Grandma

I LOVE it! you did a really good job with it.

This is really excellent. Andromeda's an interesting character, so peripheral and yet a part of so many of the characters' lives, and writing the story from her perspective was a good idea. Her conversation with Harry was very well done, and I liked the stiff, awkward dynamic between Andromeda and Narcissa. I think that Narcissa may very well have tried to reconnect with her sister after Bellatrix's death.

The beginning was a little choppy, but as soon as you got into the flow of the story things smoothed out beautifully. The dialogue was all very natural, and you always do a good job of keeping everyone in character.

Whew, I'm behind on reviews. I should have gotten to this one way earlier. Anyway, I really enjoyed it, well done as always.

Oh that was wonderful. I loved Narcissa especially, and I'm glad that Andromeda is going to keep in touch with her... though I doubt Harry will be thrilled to know that Draco is a part of his godson's life, lol : )

Awesome fic. I loved how you addressed Andromeda's feelings. She lost a lot in the second war.

Good story on Andromedea's feelings on losing her husband and child. It's good that Narcissa wants to make up with her after realizing all that her sister has lost and losing another sister. It sounds like she'll let others help her in raising Teddy and not do it on her own. I wonder if Augusta wrote to her with the lessons that she learned in raising her grandchild.

I liked it... really sweet.

goes to my favs. wonderful story. "There was a fierce protectiveness in his voice that reminded her of Sirius, and she grinned. “ my favourite line

This is really sweet. I'm glad that a lot of characters were involved, even if they became closer to Andromeda because of Tonks and Lupin, and that Andromeda and Ted's initial disgust at Lupin was addressed. I know it says that this fic is complete, but it'd be nice to read about tea with the Malfoys.

Words cannot express how much I love this story. I'm really interested in the character of Andromeda, as she has connections to so many important characters in the books but plays a very small part in them herself, and I would have loved to find out more about her. But through your fic, I now feel like I have! Immensely well written, too, which always helps!

nice

It is a great story with a great characterization. I hope you'll keep it up.

Geez, that was amazing.
I am astounded! That was beautiful!
I was blubbering the whole way through!

In the beginning there were several things I didn’t like, such as the line “In fact, she felt quite at home in graveyards, rather.” This sentence makes no sense to me. Rather should be followed by what she ACTUALLY felt, not a period.
Some bits are a little choppy. Phrases and words that are usually put in to make a story sound better are used to often, or misplaced (like rather).

However, after the characters started talking, the writing improved dramatically. Not only did the dialogue sound natural, the other, filler writing, sounded dramatically, and I enjoyed the story quite a bit.

I love this. Pure and simple. I love it.