FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| MarauderetteLily 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuseTHIS IS SO GOOD! your capture his feelings perfectly AND show his pain! personally im not a great fan of this pairing cuse i think james is better but this is so sad! i literaly cried! this is awsome! |
| Indeffinate 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuse:( poor snape , I always wondered about him and lily after I read the final book. |
| GINERVABLACK 2008-01-13 ch 1, anon. | abusei think im gonna die i felt so sorry for snape... he is the best and luv him and lily together... THAT WAS SO FREAKIN' GREAT! *SOB*... |
| CartoonFan13 2007-12-02 ch 1, | abuseSo sad, yet so sweet. I love it! Just the way I imagine it. |
| jenoncaluvkaiba 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abuseaww i love this it so brillently written and it shows severus in a diffrent light it's exactly how i imaged he would feel good work i'm gonna check your other fics if you have any others as i'm sure they are a good as this one |
| ginny 2007-09-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseIm crying pleaz write Chap. 2 *SOB* |
| Amazed 2007-08-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseone word. Wow. you're really good at writing stories, I'll give you that :3 can't wait to read other fics that you write. Once again, wow. That had a large impact on me. |
| techwiz 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseWOW!a really nice...touching story...i kinda hope iff JK writes another HP..she'll hav written something abt Snape and Lily...some kind of forgiveness 4 Snape..that is.. |
| Disco Inferno1 2007-08-04 ch 1, | abuseThis was so good! I loved it. "It was bad enough for the whole school to see him ridiculed like that, but for her to see him so vulnerable was more than he could endure and so he'd lashed out at the person closest to him."--it's always situations like that make us say things we don't mean. I think you've done very well showing how Snape felt after talking with Lily and feeling he'd lost her forever. I could feel his distress and depression. I like how his surroundings mirrored how he felt. And to have her eyes staring at him through Harry all those years--that is so much unimaginable hurt. I think you showed that well. Loved this: "As the green eyes found his black once, he saw Lily looking down at him. Finally forgiving him and extending her love to him at last." Great job! I'm so glad that you mentioned this fic in your e-mail or I might not have known you had written it! |
| millcityshaman 2007-08-02 ch 1, | abuseSnapes + Radiohead = get the tissues |
| Judy 2007-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI loved the little bits and pieces of the memories Snape remembers. That looks before his death was so powerful and heartbreaking. This was wonderful. |
| Richi03 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was absolutely beautiful. I was utterly shocked when I found out about Snape loving Lily, but at the same time it seemed to fit. You captured it all wonderfully. Thank you for writing this. |
| Vanessa 2007-07-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseOMG it was perfect! This has to be my fav one shot ever! I can't belive at the end I ended up crying . . . where's a tissue? |
| Desiree Lemmon 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseWow! Great job. You did a fantastic job of portraying Snape's hidden feelings for Lily, and partially Harry because of the eyes (very good portion), and I loved how you added parts of Deathly Hallows. I'm not a big fan of oneshots, only because I never read too many that were good, but you made me like them much more. :) |