Very interesting story! Not that many Battletech/Halo crossovers that have caught my interest. Keep up the good work, and please update soon!

Ooo so some cov tech on a mech and the anti-all Scorpios guns on mechs this is going to be fun all I need is to see it done in Gmod now of halo forge for fun and we need more chaps now plz

O Man I am now sad that the covs have met ther mach of shod I say MECH! bor covs well now that I have sid that no to more reading! And the wrest of this book/story

On the bright side the word of blake can't reverse-engineer for shit and can't really build stuff (they just steal it instead). Therefore, the lose of a malfunctioning prototype frigate to them is pretty much nothing to the UNSC. Of course, I have no idea where the author will go with this story but my point is void since there are a lot more chapters already out. Still, I don't think the WOB even HAS scientists.

Good action.

gunny

Very good chapter.

gunny

Very good start.

gunny

Good story,I got idea for you What if One UNSC,s ship geting away from Reach gets téléportred to FadCom,s space a year before the Clans invaded,do you think they can make a different?

I am not telling you what to do just giving a suggestion for stories I think would wokr.

cool! you have improved since your earlier works...

if this is a crossover then it should be put in the crossover section. When your in new story, there should be 2 buttons, one is normal, the other is crossover

are you ever gonna make a another chapter?

haha! Specter a spy! and he still has a good internal laugh about the sign language for "green." haha.

I like how you explain everything, whether its mech warrior related or halo related. that's good, because there's always going to be people who are confused. So kudos about that. Though your chapter was short again. Hey, that's okay though. Some people prefer short chapters.

And I liked the reference to LOTR in there. lol. Considers himself in a Frodo and Sam position, I see. Nice way of defining more of his personality by showing and not telling. good job.

Hmm. Teens, eh? That might be worrisome. And the Spartan armor didn't really save them, did it? It was a nice shot though. Dying to know more!

And by the way, where's the Chief in all of this? (as in, you should write more about what he's doing, too.)

oh, wow. clever! I liked when Victor's like, "Focus, Peter." haha. I laughed. This was a good chapter! Interesting, and had a lot going on. It seemed a little short, or maybe abbreviated, but that's okay. It had a lot going on.

So...they're trying to make Spartans, are they? That WOULD be a problem, wouldn't it? lol.

Neat approach. This is the first of your stories that I've read so far. Seems to be well put together and I admit I'm curious to see how it ends.

Keep up the good work.

Ahh the wonders of Battle Tech technology...

By the way having never played MechWarrior, only Mech Commander 2, how ould a Daishi compare to an Atlas in terms of size? Just curious, i have seen a Fafnir, those things are butt ugly...