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| mjels 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuselove it nice fluff |
| mabelreid 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuse“Sad, but true. I discovered there’s a lot this city has that you won’t find anywhere else,” Now what could she be talking about I wonder:) LOL I love that you fill in these little moments with them that we dont' get to see on the show. I love it. |
| DistractedlyHere 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseAww. that was...perfect. Very sweet, and true to character fic. I loved it. |
| ReJo 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuse"And when their eyes met, she smiled. Not a small, barely-there, weary smile. It was a wide, honest, eye-crinkling smile. The kind of smile he had not seen grace her beautiful face for months." You know, that was the first thing I noticed about her - a real smile. Nice detail. I like the subtle difference in the way they're interacting with each other that shows that things have changed between them. |
| daytimedrama 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseAw yay Happy sigh. That was so cute, definitely a missing scene. This is perfect for what happens in CSI NY that we didn't see in the episodes. Loved it, I can't wait for more, I hate when real life gets in the way, that why I am spending my whole summer vacation reading fanfics and not working. |