 Alaena Flame Dragonstar 2008-01-26 . chapter 1I really liked it. Very nicely written. Makes me want to dig up that episode again right now if it wasn't so late. |
 iannetine 2007-11-11 . chapter 1Aww...it's breaking my heart but still, my hearts on a flutter...
It's so sweet...I like how you depict their feelings here, they're a bit uncharacteristic but that's the beauty of it! They're so normal...so honest...They're so in love...
And cheers for the old lady! That was uncalled for but I liked it! |
 Jingy5 2007-08-23 . chapter 1*squeels* love it love it love it |
 clavee 2007-08-19 . chapter 1okay, i am in no place to call you "stupid" but if i do, i would, because this story is beautifully written. hehehe, peace out! but seriously this ones great, fuji's just great when he's devastated:p |
 verine 2007-08-02 . chapter 1Yeah.. fuji acting is so briliant, huh? He liked very suprised that time... |
 vierblith 2007-07-31 . chapter 1-hearts (very sleepy ones, though, because i lack sleep)- but -hearts- still...
-sighs- i loved that bit where Fuji was fiddling with the tennis ball that they used in first year. Then, there was Fuji acting all surprised... -sighs-
you've made my sleepy day a happy day. -cheers-
don't worry, it didn't suck. you should never say that... i loved it, you know? ^_^ |
 faithlane 2007-07-31 . chapter 1 sob...sob...
this story is beautifully written
you make me feel sad huhuhuhu...
write more ne...
bye2 |
 ketchupblood 2007-07-30 . chapter 1It didn't suck. Now you just shut up and accept that you can write much better than us normal people and all that stuff. -sigh- The part about Fuji's t-shirt reaching his knees... Um. I had an image of a dress, you know, one of those dresses that could also be a t-shirt? Right. One of those. It was a very cute image, actually. =P
I... can't honestly say that I like your last paragraph. O.o So random! =O But I did love the rest of your fic. They're all so cute, aren't they? I really do pity Atobe, or I would have, if we didn't know that nothing (serious) happened to him while Tezuka was gone. ^^; |