Please continue! This story fits in with the series very nicely, though I did not understand the part about Gabriel forcing Francesca to be his lifemate, but that's because their book is the only one I have not read (my library lost the book.)

this is one of the best stories I have read in a while. please write more soon

DUDE! you HAVE to update!! you can't just leave MY Josef like that!! update for the love of all that is good in this world!

JOSEF IS SEXY!(he's mine hands off)

I really like your story so far. I do hope that you will finish it.

I love your story!keep it up!

Isn't Skylers hair Blonde?

Here's wat i remember about josef-

1.Josef's hair color changes alot because he gets bored and changes it.
2.his hobbies and all of his face piercings and other body piercings change alot to.
3. Josef and Dimitri DON'T get along. lol

This chapter rocks!! your an f'ing genius!

That was unexpected. Please hurry and update.

You are a great writer! I love for the fact that you pull out suprises! Thar is soo awesome!! you are going to my favs! and so is this story! please update very soon for me please!

this is getting interesting...(: plz update soon...

I am squeling OMG! Josef isn't he too young wicked twist big time twist! Holy Crap you are WOW! I can't believe you did that I amin awe!

OMG! I have to see you are a phenomenal writer and with the conflict of josef Skyler and Dimitri wow this story just has unnumbered possibilties!

Thank you so much for writing this story. It is very could and I hope you continue. I just discovered this site and I'm very happy to find out that there are other Feehan fans out there like me.

This is amazing! I really like it! Please update soon!

Just one thing... you put "Joshua stumbled to the ground, gasping as the venomous talons seeped into his bloodstream.
" ... Joshua? Should that be Josef?

Awesome job!

Katie oh my god this story is great you really should do creative writing classes. i love it and ya i saw your spelling mistake too on your write up about your stories. you still need to gfix that. i love this couple too and you did a great job writing it. watch her make a book with this title though. it was great. nice job!

I LOVE THIS STORY! I just discovered the dark series a couple of weeks ago when a bought dark celebration and got hooked! Skyler and Dimitri are my favorite couple and you did a great job portraying them.

I hope you update soon, cause it'll be a long time before I can get my hands on the rest of the series