 NaruSaku-love 2008-06-08 . chapter 1I really liked this story. Sasukes going to be in a mood for a long time! |
 angelgirl-sakura 2008-06-04 . chapter 8keep it comin! |
 Sox766 2008-04-16 . chapter 8awsome story cant wait for the next chapter |
 Fox-Sama 2008-04-16 . chapter 7I like the plot, but this is to hard to read Sasuke keeps attacking Sakura thats fine but he does it in Tsunades office and she thin tex's about Ino and Kida? What the hell? good luck with this |
 Fox-Sama 2008-04-16 . chapter 2this is sorta hard to read |
 Kunoichi-of the-Leaf 2008-01-12 . chapter 7o0o0o0 poor temari1 id hate to see my lil bro w/o his shirt *wrinkles face in disgust* hahahah uno!! love that game!! |
 Gnosismaster 2008-01-12 . chapter 7Grat chapter. Keep up the great work. |
 silentXcity 2008-01-09 . chapter 6oh dearest rachel get off DDR and write something oh nd learn your persons. fisrt second third?
mm. as i told you last night wheres garra? hm write me a story about garra. i love his insomnia. hell i dont watch naruto only with garra!
love you lots weird little sis.
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 Flying Fox of Snowy Mountain 2007-11-13 . chapter 6Hi there,
Been away for a bit. Travelled, working and my own story. Nice follow up to chapter 6 with the suspense and tie of Naruto being there for her as a friend in the beginning. Also, we know Itachi despise his brother as does Sakura and Naruto.
This gives me more reason to hurt Sasgay with dynamite up his ** to lit for the moon. We going to see some action betwee Naruto vs Sasgay? Or will the emo butthead run?
At least Sakura is safe and tell the police to through emo ** into jail. Also, you have Itachi take part in more things, will the Ataksuki(become wanted criminals or something?) be a part of this or left out?
Anyways, good chapter, can't wait for the next one.
PS. Currently a big chapter for my story hopefully will be up. Hope you have time to look at it when I do update. |
 Gnosismaster 2007-11-11 . chapter 6Great chapter. I like it. |
 The Dead Prince 2007-11-11 . chapter 6nice |
 dbzgtfan2004 2007-11-11 . chapter 1This is a cute and funny story. Please continue. Naruto and Sakura forever. |
 Born From a NaruSaku Lemon 2007-10-15 . chapter 4Sorry about the wait, I was... gone for a while. Anyways, the new chapter five isn't SasuSaku like the first one, and even though I put I'm done with a fic, I still check up on it, I'm just too curious for my own good.
Anyways, hope you update soon. |
 Flying Fox of Snowy Mountain 2007-10-11 . chapter 4Hi there,
This is my re-review for chapter 5 for the everyone. Can I say, you did a really good job of the re-write with keeping Sakura's developement in line with the story flow without compromising her realtionship to Naruto and herself. The crowd you added make it more realistic effect of her really flirting even though she is pretending. You have also wonderful made Sasgay going for her flirting without too much effort(consider Sasgay already wanted her, but she hate him to no end).
Now you add something very interesting that gives this chapter a better send off for the next chapter. Itachi, you have involved in a certain way, now we will have to wait and see what it is. Also, before I forget, don't forget to include Naruto somewhere in that scheme(he is in on it too). You gave this chapter even somewhat of intrigue on what will happen next.
Itachi+Sasgay+handcuffs(ducktape)+revenge= a big surprise.
Later.
PS. I this is way the heck better then what you did before and you kept the flow of the story going as the developement of Sakura foward or at least neutral until we get to NaruSaku scenes(think most NaruSaku fans are waiting for). As for my own story, still trudgin along, will have 2 chappies by this weekend I hope. |
 Kunoichi-of the-Leaf 2007-10-11 . chapter 5lol i like sakuras outfit...no duh temari'd have that in her closet |