An interesting little story XD

Whee! I love this, it was beautifully written and so technical but to a point where I could still follow :>

STARSCREAM AND BUMBLEBE!

But...I may have cheated cause I watch you on DA (this is ringaling :D)

Most interesting!

VERY interesting; I like it, especially the characterizations. =D

Lest play a guessinggme:

Pretty obvious the Decepticon was Starscream. I have a feeling the autobot was Preceptor?

Since, he has the telescope and pre-cepts...stuff...?

Am I right? Great that you left it open, Loved it to death...but am I right? Tell me!!

That was interesting, but who were the Transformers? I only saw the new movie, s I don't know much, but I got the impression they were Bumblebee and Starscream.

Good job! This story was really well written and I enjoyed reading it. I think I know who the two were...

That...that was a wonderful peice of fiction. I felt like I was right there with the two Transformers. I do believe that I know who they are, but I don't want to ruin it for everybody else. The seeker is one of my favorit though. This story just whisks you away right into it. You have done an awesome job!

I love this story! Very well written and interesting!