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Viridian
2009-11-04 . chapter 2
Loved the Sorting Song, especially the last stanza. It was nicely written, and did not feel forced or awkward as many attempts to write Sorting Songs usually turn out to be.
the real snape
2009-06-02 . chapter 3
Like your take on McGonagall so far, you keep her nicely in character.
Love //"And Lupin--" McGonagall said, her back toward him. "For future reference, Extendable Ears are on the banned items list. Perhaps you'd like to pass this information along to Miss Wood."//
the real snape
2009-06-02 . chapter 2
Hi there,
Just discovered your story, love it so far!
Especially liked both the similarities and the differences between Flitwick's greeting of the new students here and McGonagall's one in canon. Well done.
Favorite phrase:
//"'Loads of people have died here, but as long as you stick together, which might be a bit difficult since we're purposefully separating you, you'll probably be all right.' Charming." That Winnie is a smart girl. Look forward to knowing her better.
Stripysockz
2009-01-21 . chapter 14
Hahaha, I LOVE Winnie's character! She's hilarious, going into the men's toilets and all, but hmm, maybe you should have Oliver find out, it doesn't seem fair to have him as the only one out of the loop. And I really want to find out what Julia's hiding...
Noir Idol
2009-01-07 . chapter 6
haha this story's so cute its gona make me smash ma pumpkins
EmmyH
2008-12-31 . chapter 13
Oh, PLEASE update the story, it is SO lovely and sadly you've abandoned it a little bit. :(
sprink05
2008-12-03 . chapter 13
love it!
at first i thought J might be a werewolf... but i'm thinking some kind of ghoul/ghost/spirit/soul thing. the hat can't recognize her. she disappeers suddenly. nick couldn't hear her question. and then that whole "are you new?" freak out he had at the invisable spot which might have been where julie was standing.

write more please!
Adventure-Seeking-Juliet
2008-10-29 . chapter 13
PLEASE UPDATE??!
Stripysockz
2008-10-29 . chapter 13
More mysteries? I didn't think that was possible! Lol! I liked Oliver playing the - peacemaker? I don't know if that's the right word or not, but it seems to fit. I really want to find out what Julia's secret is, though, update soon!
pip
2008-10-29 . chapter 13
and the plot thickens... can't wait to read the next chapter!
CwamBeta
2008-09-29 . chapter 12
Good story, I hope that you update soon! This is now on my story alert list.
So this is real life
2008-09-28 . chapter 12
So glad to have that answered. Now we just need to find out about Julia's secret...
Vullinia
2008-09-27 . chapter 12
wow, normally I'm quite good at guessing what's going to happen in a fic but you have me completely stumped, nice work!
Aspieturtle
2008-09-27 . chapter 12
I love this story. Not sure about the Remus incident, but I'm sure you know where you're taking it. I can't wait for more.
greengirlblue
2008-08-03 . chapter 11
An excellent story. The Mystery. The Drama...!

I love the relationship between Teddy and his friends - they're all distinct, interesting characters. Oliver's observations are pretty spot on. I enjoyed that section.

I'm so curious about what will happen next! What is happening to Teddy, and how does it relate to his father, if at all? What's going on with Julia? What will McGonagall do in the face of angry house elves and ministry officials?
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