o mi god! the endin was really nice, i really luvd it!

aww that was soo cute and soo sad

*yells, to Kai fans. go kill her *
*mad kai fans run after Smiffy*
* umm wait! (Stops them)*
*we need her to make new stories, and umm supporting her and umm she a good friend*
**everyone laughs**
**Kai Fan = Dang Tala, you soft.
**Me = Wha, im not Tala Ivanob.
**Kai fan = yeah sure.
** me = im Tala K Asakura
**Kai fan - umm ok, but your still soft

**Me = WHATEVER, (ROL EYES)

hehehehee

whoa kawaii kai

hahah cute chappy

well finally i read this story. good one, great eps where they

*tears* that was so beautiful! i loved it!

NO KAI! That was so sad "sobs" but at least he is able to be at peace. I didn't want it to happen but I just had this feeling that it was coming and it was a beautiful way for him to go. Don't worry this Kai fan won't kill you at least as I have done it too. Though even with his death this was still a well written story and you've done a very good job with the first person point of view. I can't wait to read more.

Your avid reader Kayla

No, no killing. Bawling rather. Sheesh... This was beautiful.

That was a good story. It was quite sad how Kai died, but I wouldn't have been able to make it sound so peaceful.

Vegeta01869

*whipes a tear away* that is so sad! but it was a very nice way for Kai to go. amazing story! very emotional! i think you should do another chapter at his funeral... actually that would be to depressing, but it would be nice to see what they would write on the grave stone.

or do another chapter about when they tell Jean.

you don't have to, their just ideas.

anyway great story! you should put it up on DA!

Aww... Poor Kai :(
Hope the next chapter comes soon!

very good chapter smiffy! i luv it!

hahaha Tari will collapse if she tries to carry either Tala or Kai! XD by the way how much of an age diffrence is there between Kai and Tari? Just Wonderin!


-your faithful reader Micky (A.K.A A Friend For Life And Beyond)

hey gr8 chapter, i like the way you added your own character into the beyblade series.
She sounds kwl, but I'll read your other story like u suggested
I can't wait to see what happens next as after all in the series Kai just turns up and helps Tyson win, then we just see him and Tyson alone on a hill - I wanna know wat u'll do as I'm sure u're gonna change it ^^
update soon!!

kwl chapter!! you are really good at writeing in a POV - you should do more stories like it, or put POV bit in your other stories
Anywayz gr8 job plz update soon!