This story is too cute. I squee'd my guts up at the first 'kupo'.

Loved the idea for different accents, although my brain translated Selphie's lines into Yorkshire, which I found hilarious.

I think there were only a couple of typos, but nothing major. Sometimes uploading to causes words to get deleted or skipped in random sentences, which is annoying.

XD Oh gods that was bloody crazy. All those MOOGLES!

Oh wow...

The British talking made my brain go funny...