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| cdaqtcherry 2008-06-16 ch 8,  | abuseI just love this chapter and the fluff! Yay! :) |
| 1angelette 2008-06-13 ch 1, | abuse"Entering is good," the reviewer began. "Whaddya mean it's good?" the story's author interrupted. "I don't understand any problems which could result from this!" "THAT'S RIGHT!" added one of her friends. "I'm purple!" a purple dog interjected. "Stop! Stop, stop!" The reviewer slammed her hands over her ears. "It's so hard to read your text when you lump it together like that!" "Wait, but you just said two things in quotes on that line..." The author looked confused. "Yeah, but I'm one person. You enter on change of speaker, okay?" The reviewer proceeded to express how, despite this flaw in the story's diction, she still thought it was much better than a lot of the stuff you find in this section and she was certain to read more. |
| passion143j.c. 2008-05-03 ch 10, | abuseI loved it! This was so great! hehe...later:) |
| roudyredd 2008-03-06 ch 10, | abuseYEAH! FUN FUN FUN keep up the good work! |
| roudyredd 2008-03-06 ch 6, | abuseMORE MORE MORE! |
| roudyredd 2008-03-06 ch 4, | abuseCLIFFIES! GR! good job so far keep at it REDD HEADS ROCK |
| daseyfan2008 2008-01-21 ch 10, | abuseso cute! loved it! |
| Ducklin 2008-01-11 ch 10, | abuseI really don't care if you connected planet drool and earth it still was a very good story! |
| SalanTrong 2007-11-27 ch 2, | abuseIt's not that she needs to be asleep to cool down, it's just that she couldn't calm down while surrounded by snow, on her way to see someone she hated. |
| Elf Princess Kiri 2007-11-17 ch 10, | abuseI LOVED IT! Chapter 10 was a bit...to fast. Maybe rushed. :/ Eh, but don't let that bring you down. It was a good story and so durn uber cute! X3 |
| Raven's Nobody 2007-11-02 ch 10, | abuseaw. so cute. plz rite a sequel. |
| Raven's Nobody 2007-11-01 ch 9, | abuseso cute. will sharkie find his dad. |
| Raven's Nobody 2007-11-01 ch 8, | abuseo my effing god. what |
| Raven's Nobody 2007-11-01 ch 6, | abuseomg omg. is she dead! is she dead! |
| Raven's Nobody 2007-10-30 ch 4, | abusegr. i hate you. ur gonna kill lavagirl. |