omg. this made me cry like i haven't in years. you should be so proud of your writing

good job

ok i normally wouldn't follow a story quite so long but this is really good please update again soon

OMG That was so sad. (tears) You did a great job. I really hope you post more. I can't wait to find out what happens now that Monica has died. Have a wonderful week. )

What happens next? Is Monica allowed back into heaven? What will Andrew do? Update soon please. I wanna know what happens next.

Um, hello? all that time and I am not happy! She was supposed to open her eyes at the last minute, to rally, to pull through for him! What the heck happened?

Fix it! Fix it now! I beg of you!

The pain of Andrew's grief was horrible and as I sat here at work I had to keep from getting teary as my officemates would think me insane!

Not happy! At all!

Wow! This is a great story! You left a real cliff hanger! lol:D Cannot wait for more! Keep up the awesome writing!

This is beautiful! I love Touched By an Angel, and one day I'm going to get around to writing my own shipper fan story about Monica and Andrew. Yours is wonderful and it's very intriguing and keeps me reading! It's giving me ideas for my own (not saying I'll steal yours). Anyway the only bit of criticism I have for you is the fact that in Chapter 5, Monica and Andrew say how lucky they are to have each other. The only problem is that Monica doesn't believe in luck. Angels beleive everything is the will of God and not luck. I know this from hearing her say it in the TV show. Perhaps you can change this to them telling each other how happy they are that the Father gave them the wonderful oppertunity to work for Him together... or something like that. Other than what I told you, this is really an amazing and well written story! Good work :)

Your story is very good and creative. I haven't read any like it, its very sad. I feel so bad for Monica. I really hope you post more. I can't wait to find out what happens to her now. Have a fantastic week. )

OH MY GOD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!

Such a heartbreaking, moving chapter! What happens next? Is she dying? I hope she isn't but that Andrew comes in just in the nick of time to save the day and bring her back from the darkness.

I'm very glad to see you're back and I missed your great writing! Please keep on gracing us with your talent, Angie!

Please update REALLY soon. I really wanna find out what happens next. Does she die? Does Adam and Andrew manage to pull off keeping her alive?

Okay, Ang, here is the deal. I don't think I can wait a year for Andrew to show up and I'm praying, save the day. Such a heartbreaking chapter and maybe Tess finally gets it. I have missed you and your sharing of your gift of writing with us. Hope you stay and hang out with us, the few and mighty, on the TBAA fanfic board ;).

More soon, please? We have waited a very long time for them to be together again!

This is excellently done, AngieBaby. You describe Monica's pain especially poignantly, and you've given us one heck of a cliffhanger! Keep it up! :)

OMG. When are you going to add the next chapter? I wanna know what happens next! What's Andrew going to do now that he's being pushed into the deep end?