really good I can't wait for the next chapter update soon

OMG UPDATE!

wauw asome

Ok, so this chapter left me very...confused. Which I think is a good thing, because I don't think I'm supposed to know everything that's going on. But, it's definitely the start of a whole lot of intrigue! And I think I'm going to like it!
Love
Lyny

O.o a wild plot device appeared! Throw a pokeball! (ignore that) As usual great chapter (I'm interested to see where this is going) I find the Royai in your stories really drive them along quite nicely. Though, looking back at the chapter, for a good 4,0 word chapter, not much happened. Not that I'm complaining or anything. Loved it as usual.

lol i'm glad my leg isn't sore anymore lol very nice chappy once again glompie luvs hugs and pocky
teal'c
by the way, i forgot on a japanese test what naniirodesuka was meaning what color is it i felt so stupid afterwards lol

WOAH! that's creepy cause I got a story I'm making (nothing to do with anime) that has similarities to this plot! I mean, it's really strange to see a story you're making then you look up a story that's already out that seems so much like yours that you think you must've somehow have a connection. Anyway, the story's really nice, and it gave me inspiration to continue with my story so thank you. oh, and my story's called Celestial Love with the girl names ELizabeth, Liza for short.

Really Good I can't wait for the next chapter update soon

wait.. is this the last chapter?

wait... years ago? that encounter at the lake was YEARS ago? damn, how time flies eh?.

...there better be more to this story...

Wow...the story's getting more intricate. The events are getting thrilling. I wonder what would happen if Roy discovered that Riza was a Gruffman? Along the first few chapters, a Fallen (it was an old woman, I forgot her name) had said a statement with 'Gruffman' as a term used for exasperation, rather than 'God'. You know, ex. "For the love of God!" is changed to "For the love of Gruffman!". IT seems that the Gruffman family is quite influential in the Angel World. Hmm...I wonder...

Ah, the long awaited!
I like the fluff! And you mentioned izumi and Sig, very nice. I can't wait until the plot thickens again!

Ah, the long awaited!
I like the fluff! And you mentioned izumi and Sig, very nice. I can't wait until the plot thickens again!

I absolutely love this story! The end was funny when Izumi wouldn't help her and Rizas like 'traitor!'. Anyway. Update asap