wait.. is this the last chapter?

wait... years ago? that encounter at the lake was YEARS ago? damn, how time flies eh?.

...there better be more to this story...

Wow...the story's getting more intricate. The events are getting thrilling. I wonder what would happen if Roy discovered that Riza was a Gruffman? Along the first few chapters, a Fallen (it was an old woman, I forgot her name) had said a statement with 'Gruffman' as a term used for exasperation, rather than 'God'. You know, ex. "For the love of God!" is changed to "For the love of Gruffman!". IT seems that the Gruffman family is quite influential in the Angel World. Hmm...I wonder...

Ah, the long awaited!
I like the fluff! And you mentioned izumi and Sig, very nice. I can't wait until the plot thickens again!

Ah, the long awaited!
I like the fluff! And you mentioned izumi and Sig, very nice. I can't wait until the plot thickens again!

I absolutely love this story! The end was funny when Izumi wouldn't help her and Rizas like 'traitor!'. Anyway. Update asap

No privacy! I feel sorry for those two. That's family for you though. Nothing is sacred.

Good luck with nanowrimo. I have a school friend who's doing that.That's a whole lot of words to get out.

Wow, really great chapter. I can see some major foreshadowing going on here, and it makes me excited for what's going to be coming up next! I really found the line where Roy says "I just accept things the way it is. My quest for scientific knowledge died a long long time ago." It reminds me VIVIDLY of Hawkeye-Sensei in the manga, where he says, "When alchemists cease to think they die. That's why I am a man who died long ago." I find that to be a really interesting parallel, and it's something I hope you might consider playing with in the future. As always, the bits of fluff make me heart absolutely sing! And good luck with Nanowrimo!! I went on the website for it yesterday, cause I'd never heard of it before I saw you mention it on your profile. Sounds like fun! Thanks for the awesome chapter love!
Love in Christ,
Lyny

I haven't reviewed in ages. bah. DX To hold your coffee!

Roy is so sweet! *sque*
The dialogues are really really good. It's great to know that Riza is slowly healing and Roy is there for her. :)

Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!


~Erinn.

I just looked up NaNoWriMo and it's making me (litteraly) dizzy. Exellent chapter by the way. I do love this story.

lol i liked what you added to the conversation at the end with izumi lol nice touch glompie luvs hugs and pocky
teal'c

X3 this is soo good

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I just finished reading through this, and this concept is so novel! This could be a novel in it's own, without affiliation towards FMA (though we all know FMA makes everything amazing).

Please update soon?
This one?

I love it so much, I'm so intrigued and proper books are failing to hold my interest as I want to hear more of THIS story.

I know, I'm so behind, I am epic fail. I'm sorry. But this was a really wonderful chapter. I love the description, especially the clouds "eating some of ther brightness like a gluttonous monster." Amazing, truly amsazing writing.

I am really glad that we got a sweet moment between Roy and Riza during this chapter. They deserve it after all that has happened. Yay for the engagement as well! I'm glad they have finally announced it.

Thank you for providing us with yet another wonderful chapter!