 Wiccid 2009-07-16 . chapter 1Oh thank god, lifeline in the neverending sea of Clach. Seriously, this fic could have been terible and I still would have complimented you for deviating from the typical Claire/Zach fics that I so loathe.
But as it stands, this fic was pretty good, love the title. Although, a couple of biits of Noah dialogue seem a little off like the bit Noah saysL
"Do you have any interest in my daughter on a more intimate level?"
I just feel it could have been phrased better. The rest was good though, points to you. |
 Jordan 2008-01-23 . chapter 1 *GE* Happy but now empty seeing that there are no other Zach slash fanfics :( You know, even though it'd be a little late, you should write a Zach/Peter fic -flails- Thanks, I love you! |
 Born2Bbad 2008-01-12 . chapter 1*giggles* This could have been so very wrong, but instead, you made it endearing. It's about time Zach got slashed with someone, even if it IS Claire's dad. I like Claire's characterization in this; she's pretty understanding of Zach, which makes me happy. Great job. |
 bec7012 2007-08-30 . chapter 1Genius! I loved the line Poor Zach. |
 Me ^_^ 2007-08-25 . chapter 1 LOL! Crack pairing here! |
 Kilroy 2007-08-01 . chapter 1 Funny story! But in America, you're legal at 18. |
 Ladywilde 2007-08-01 . chapter 1That was hilarious! You really can write any pairing, can't you? That was great... |
 tethe'alla 2007-07-31 . chapter 1Haha. I really liked this story. I love how you made this pairing seem to work! Kudos to you ;) |
 shippo_smommy 2007-07-31 . chapter 1 Okay, I was expecting to be little squicked, but really, this was just hilarious. And the title? pure gold.:D |