 Aztec 2009-11-29 . chapter 1 That was realy, realy sweet. |
 nap 2009-08-15 . chapter 1 simply beautiful |
 Mysterious Jedi 2007-11-18 . chapter 1very cute, and made me laugh |
 Ponytail Goddess 2007-08-22 . chapter 1LOL! NANNIES! I laughed so hard at that! |
 Gwenneth Tinuiel 2007-08-01 . chapter 1i really thought it was sweet. thanks for the good read. |
 Rae Simmons 2007-07-31 . chapter 1Aww. That's so sweet. There were a couple of places where the tense wasn't right like at one point you said "would always been there" but that aside it was very well written. |
 Estel-hopeofmen 2007-07-31 . chapter 1I hear-tell, gwador-nin is nore accurate for aragorn. it is supposed to mean swotn and not by blood. I know not how true that is, but makes sense to me.
"Erestor smiled with the boy nodded his brown head and smiled at Erestor"...I think you mean "Estel smiled with the boy nodded his brown head and smiled at Erestor" we all make mistakes : ) .
I must say this is very well for one who has not read the books. (perhaps you read the tale of Aragorn and Arwen in the appendices of ROTK)..yes, very well indeed.
Nanny! XD! I'm in a library so I had to be quiet. but if there were stairs nearby I would have rdsl'd! (roll down stairs laughing) |
 Gord and V 2007-07-31 . chapter 1Aw, this was very cute. I loved how you described what a father and mother do. :)
Peace out boy scout,
Gord and V |
 Calenlass Greenleaf1 2007-07-31 . chapter 1Slightly more AU than I would like it to be, but it was a good read. It's very sweet. :)
-Calenlass |
 Neld 2007-07-31 . chapter 1 Nah. Elrond thinks a Nana is a kind of bird. That's what they told him when he asked.
Poor Gilraen. |