i like this story so far so hurry up with the next update lol till then later

Started out really well. Characters all seemed right and this is looking like a good story to follow along. Can't wait to see how things go.

nice story update soon!

Keep updating this story has potential...Good Work

I like where this is going; it seems well thought-out and believable. Nagato and Kyon seem pretty in character as well! Kudos :] Can't wait for the next chapter(s?)!

Excellent start. Very well written, and the characters feel incredibly real. I'll be excited to see where this leads, especially given the slight hints you've given me.

Well written, flows very well!

I wonder what will happen...