|Reviews for Sexy Jutsu, Ineffective?|
| LavenderLilies 8/7/07 . chapter 1
That was most definetly cute. Seriously, it had me smiling with this stupid grin on my face. I liked it very much.
| Dragon up a tree 8/1/07 . chapter 1
That was really good! I commend you on a superbly written fic!(that sounds too much like Gai -_-'') I love stories like this and you pulled it off very well!
| xxNEESHxx 8/1/07 . chapter 1
aw.. so cute : )
| xelloss100 7/31/07 . chapter 1
Cool idea... Fun story! Love the way you portrait both characters... very cute!
| Liara-Shadowsong 7/31/07 . chapter 1
This one-shot was very cute, and the thought of the infamous Copy-Nin ripping off as oddball a technique as the Sexy no Jutsu is quite funny. I do, however, have a tiny bit of criticism for you.
A scene divider bar of "review" a number of times is a rather annoying idea; I suggest a new one that doesn't say anything, for example and actual line if you can get one to stay in the chapter after updloading it. If you can't get that to work, I suggest using something like "scene change" "line" or even just a plain "O" to hold an extra blank line as a divider instead.
Also, holding chapters for a ransom of X reviews is extremely immature and liable to either decrease your review count to the point where you must either abandon the story for lack of reviews or break your word to not update, or to reduce the quality of reviews received to along the lines of "gr8 chap! update plz!" No joke.
| CW 7/31/07 . chapter 1
The Copy nin of Konoha, master of 1,0 jutsu ripping off sexy jutsu? Funny!
| hannah 7/31/07 . chapter 1
loved it like always!
| Mo de Aries 7/31/07 . chapter 1
Great! It was really cute! _
| Reviewreviewreveiwreviewreview 7/31/07 . chapter 1
You want a review? Sure, here it goes. Stop being so obsessed with getting reviews and work on the story instead. Good authors get good reviews. People who demand them are nothing more than posers. I didn't even bother reading past the second line of:
And demanding reviews for new chapters? P.A.T.H.E.T.I.C.
Aren't your stories good enough to stand without begging for reviews? Guess not!
| Hawk wing 7/31/07 . chapter 1
aw this was a kawaii oneshot XD *favs*