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Reviews For: Christmas Wish

person
2007-08-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseum Where did the baby come from. i mean what part of kouichi his butt.
Rei
2007-08-02
ch 1, anon.
abuse0_0

This was WAY too rushed. The lemon scene was also rushed, but that's okay.

The only funny part was ["Nah, I'm just kidding!" the bandana-headed boy said, and sat back down.]

I read some of your other stories. On the upside, your writing has improved.
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