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Paosheep
2009-05-26 . chapter 7
^_^ Good.
Syek
2009-05-01 . chapter 7
Hooray for updates =D Future events look wonderfully exciting, and I'm very intrigued. *koffhanskoff* Um, I mean, yay mysteries :D
Kasysty
2009-04-24 . chapter 7
*Happy dance* You're back! ^__^ I'm glad you updated, this story is great like always and Sensenic is awesome!
Sparkling Moon Phoenix
2009-04-19 . chapter 7
O_o! Am I seeing things here Fatality? You are actualy alive and have updated one of the best SoA fics I have come across. As is normal for you, the flow of the fiction is very smooth.

I laughed my head off when Centime was termed the DD! Designated Drunk! HEHE! Sensenic is back too! Plus Gilder is upto his old tricks with the ladies as ususual.

THanks for a trio of fantastic chapters!

I have posted my SoA fic again. Any advice you could give me regarding that would be most appreciated!

SMP X
Derek Barona
2009-04-18 . chapter 7
She's back! Woohoo!

And oh man, we're gonna have a showdown for the coin!
kasysty
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
I know you have a life but I hope you'll update your fanfiction soon.
The Right Hand Of Fate
2008-03-10 . chapter 4
I have returned from yet ANOTHER hiatus! It makes me a little sad to see this hasn't been updated since last year, but the 2 chapters added since the last time I was here are quality! Can't wait to see the next update!

I need to stop being lazy and write something... My last submission was almost 3 years ago 0_o

Matt
Steeple333
2007-12-06 . chapter 4
I read all these chapters this morning, so I had no opprotunity to review...

Wait, is Enrique not gonna sail the world? Is he just going to sit on his regal butt, frustrated that he can't take any action? What about Moegi? What's going to happen to the uber-cute canon couple? D; Nu...

Not that I mind Alfonso coming along for the ride. ^_^ Though... he seems too cool (in the chilly sense) in this story. I wish there would be some of the humor from the game - namely, hilarity at Alphonso's expense. xD Maybe I just want to see that he's still the same, because he seemed pretty ** a good deal of the time (for good reason).

As for your OCs... well, when I read their flowery descriptions, my brain was "Warning! Warning! OCs get more poetic physical descriptions! Possibility of Mary Sue imminent!" But, of course, I figured you wouldn't. Aside from that "warning sign", you relieved my concern by making their personalities likable. ^_^ Murray is so silly... he makes me think of another OC from an awesome Phoenix Wright fic. Not in a copyright-violation way, just a similar personality base.

Y'know... that sailor, whom you've dubbed "Vash" - when I first saw him, I was momentarily confused as to the man's gender. Very androgynous, y'know? I figured "male" solely because Guilder would hit on him otherwise. @_@ Oh, that reminds me... will Clara show up? (Arrgh... I mix up her name with "Claudia" so much, I forgot it! I had to look up her freaking name. T_T)

Hee, Lawrence... doesn't surprise me. A mercenary is naturally untied to his employer's politics, right?
Meowzy-chan
2007-11-14 . chapter 4
Oh! An Alfonso chapter! He's such a clever little devil, ain't he? Aw...

I wonder... Will Enrique be joining them as well? It seems likely, because he desperately wanted to escape Valua in the game. But will he be in time to get on the Delphinus along with Alfonso and Hans? (assuming, of course, that Alfonso's plan succeeds...)
Sparkling Moon Phoenix
2007-11-14 . chapter 4
This is developing nicely! Finally caught up on the other fic you have in this section! This is better than the first one! Alfonso is a sneaky little git! Can't wait to see how that plan turns out! My fiction is a piece of crap compared to yours! Could you read it and give me some advice, please? I am in the process of rewriting it; but a more experienced eye might help!

Thanks again for a great fiction!

SPM X
Arcon1
2007-11-14 . chapter 4
Good chapter.Keep up the good work. Thanks.
Hunter-Killer360
2007-11-14 . chapter 4
X3 Leave it to Lynx-kun to be gender-confused.

Oh, devious lil Alfonso. You've made him a million times more clever than I would have ever thought possible. >3
Kasysty
2007-11-13 . chapter 4
Oh, Alfonso has a plan! I can't wait to read the next chapter, this is going to be interesting :D
Desert Lynx
2007-11-13 . chapter 4
I'm glad you updated and it's good, but I have one complaint. It's too damn short!
Paosheep
2007-11-13 . chapter 4
I like Alfonso the soon-to-be-out-of-the-closet traitor. He's fun to read.

Lookin' forward to just how the plot develops... it oughta be fun. ^_^
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