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I-love-inuyasha-so-much
2008-06-27 . chapter 5
yes plz wake up inuyasha!
leafstar
2008-06-21 . chapter 17
the bowl is her source isnt it
Inukag-mirosan lover
2008-01-13 . chapter 1
I really like this story. I don't know how you come up with such interesting ideas. I would have never come up with such a good story! I really liked reading it! Plus, there were links to everything else in the story. Like, from the movie, Inuyasha had remembered when he first kissed her. It's really Creative! Except, one thing, I think you could have done a lot better on the end of the story! No offense. But, it could have been more, Big!
Spooky Pumpkin
2007-11-13 . chapter 21
Ok, don't say your story is weird. if it's weird then that just shows how unique your style of writing is! I love how you write! it's very interesting!
Enjiru
2007-11-13 . chapter 16
Ok i don't really think Kagome would die before inuyasha because she has a longer life span because of being a miko and by getting together with inuyasha i think she would then get the lifespan of a half demon. i love your story so far!
5redroses
2007-10-31 . chapter 25
Oww! I thought this was another chapter. Love the story, especially little details such as the satin ribbon.
ja ne
5redroses
2007-10-31 . chapter 23
I loved the "se" bit by Miroku, I wonder if he picked that up from Kagome somehow, I don't think they used to call it that.
5redroses
2007-10-31 . chapter 22
Go Shippou!
5redroses
2007-10-31 . chapter 18
Couldn't Kilala have taken half the group across then gone back for the other half? Logic.
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5redroses
2007-10-31 . chapter 16
Great story so far, and in answer to your question, in most fanfics when Kagome and Inuyasha mate they bond so that Kagome gains a similar life span to him. Or in some other fics they get together in the present because Inuyasha waited for 500 years for her.
5redroses*
5redroses
2007-10-31 . chapter 1
What have you done, Kagome?
Loved Forever
2007-10-20 . chapter 25
ya that confused me but i figuered that was a mistake
cho hakki
2007-09-25 . chapter 24
Great finish to the story. that about sums it up and also the whole story was great and i see a huge opinin for a sequal. i dont know if you will but it would be a great idea if you did make a sequal to it.
Avaira
2007-09-23 . chapter 24
Cute story. Aww... That was a cute end scene. ^^

One thing though.. The kimono part wasn't that great. I don't think it fit in with the story to well.

Anyway, I liked the story overall. Great job! ^^
Thundercat
2007-09-23 . chapter 24
I'm not trying to be mean but there are certain details in this chap that kinda bother me. 1 The locket. How in the world did Miroku get a locket in the Edo period? The last time I checked the lockets where a European type of jewelry. 2nd the kimono.
What *type* of kimono was it? Did you know that there are several types of kimono for women? Did you know that Edo period kimono style is different from modern Japanese kimono style. If Kagome wears a modern kimono in Inuyasha's time, she'd look outta place. Heck she already looks outta place with uniform of hers! Making a really *good* kimono and obi takes time and *skill*. I heard you have to train under a master.

The kimono sash is called an obi. There are different ways to tie an obi. MOST obi even come with additional parts.
I suggest you go to wikapedia and do some research. Look up kimono and obi. There are certain "rules" when it comes to wearing kimono and obi ya know.
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